GrushaVashnadze
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Can anyone help me? I am looking for the right word/words to use as a sound effect, to imply, without actually saying so, that a woman is masturbating.
For men, just writing "Fap fap" in the narrative does the trick. That is an onomatopoeia for only one thing. The reader immediately knows what the male is doing.
But is there an equally clear onomatopeoia to imply female masturbation? I wondered about something like "Squelch squelch" - or "Squish squelch" But, unless accompanied by further prose narrative, these phrases have, I think, too many possible implications.
For context, here is a little micro-story using the "Fap fap" trope, which I think works quite well:
“Oh, just look at that girl’s ‘air, Jack – innit beau’iful?”
“Sam, I’m not looking at her hair…” Fap fap…
“But it’s fuckin’ awesome!”
“Perhaps – but under the current circumstances you will forgive me for concentrating on a different part of her anatomy.”
“Like what?”
Sigh. “Like her cunt, of course. You can’t fuck hair!” Fap fap…
“Well, yer not fuckin’ anyfink at the moment – ‘part from yer own fuckin’ fist!”
“Fair point.” Fapfap…
“Uh… Jack?”
“Yes?” Fapfap…
“I got a cunt.”
“So?” Fapfapfap…
“Fuck me?”
“Oh… I hadn’t thought of that… Hang on a minute…” Fapfapfapfap…
Sigh.
For men, just writing "Fap fap" in the narrative does the trick. That is an onomatopoeia for only one thing. The reader immediately knows what the male is doing.
But is there an equally clear onomatopeoia to imply female masturbation? I wondered about something like "Squelch squelch" - or "Squish squelch" But, unless accompanied by further prose narrative, these phrases have, I think, too many possible implications.
For context, here is a little micro-story using the "Fap fap" trope, which I think works quite well:
“Oh, just look at that girl’s ‘air, Jack – innit beau’iful?”
“Sam, I’m not looking at her hair…” Fap fap…
“But it’s fuckin’ awesome!”
“Perhaps – but under the current circumstances you will forgive me for concentrating on a different part of her anatomy.”
“Like what?”
Sigh. “Like her cunt, of course. You can’t fuck hair!” Fap fap…
“Well, yer not fuckin’ anyfink at the moment – ‘part from yer own fuckin’ fist!”
“Fair point.” Fapfap…
“Uh… Jack?”
“Yes?” Fapfap…
“I got a cunt.”
“So?” Fapfapfap…
“Fuck me?”
“Oh… I hadn’t thought of that… Hang on a minute…” Fapfapfapfap…
Sigh.