[Fantasy I've been toying with for a while...]

Zarah_B

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I've joined the site recently to motivate me to write. The real reason I write erotica is that I can only fall asleep at night after thinking of character and story ideas...and at the wee hours of the morning when I go to bed, my mind is not usually G rated. Anyways, one of the stories that's popped up more than once is:

A slightly butch lesbian thief robs a diner in South Texas and ends up taking captive/hostage one of the waitress, who I picture as Mexican-born and in her early twenties. The rest is different each time a imagine it, but with gritty imagery, long drives and roach motels off of I-35.

Anyone interested in fleshing this out? I apologize in advance if it sounds cheesy to you.
 
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I've joined the site recently to motivate me to write. The real reason I write erotica is that I can only fall asleep at night after thinking of character and story ideas...and at the wee hours of the morning when I go to bed, my mind is not usually G rated. Anyways, one of the stories that's popped up more than once is:

A slightly butch lesbian thief robs a diner in South Texas and ends up taking captive/hostage one of the waitress, who I picture as Mexican-born and in her early twenties. The rest is different each time a imagine it, but with gritty imagery, long drives and roach motels off of I-35.

Anyone interested in fleshing this out? I apologize in advance if it sounds cheesy to you.

do you want to be the butch thief or the waitress?
 
In the fantasy, I'm always the waitress and the thief is always a skinny blonde in a wifebeater/tank top. I wonder what that says about me.
 
You can try the sexual roleplaying forum here.

Since it happens over and over, it might be fun to run it like "Groundhog Day" where the same beginning happens over and over.

How does it play out? Does the thief tie up and gag the waitress?

Does she tie the waitress to the bedposts so she can have a little fun with her before making her getaway?

Does the waitress ever want the thief take the waitress with her?
 
In the fantasy, I'm always the waitress and the thief is always a skinny blonde in a wifebeater/tank top. I wonder what that says about me.

I think it says you've got a story to write. I think the direction you're headed is some pretty rough non-consensual stuff. But the skinny blonde could be overpowered by the more full-figured waitress. After a really good catfight in the dessert the winner takes her revenge.
 
Cheezy?

Your idea isn't exactly strange........ I could write that story but I'd need more input. Why does this butch abandon her first target and settle for the waitress and how would a male, if any, play any part in your fantasy? How would she use her subject? Would she end up submitting? Give me more and I'll try writing it for you. lol......... So you can sleep more soundly at night.....


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In the fantasy, I'm always the waitress and the thief is always a skinny blonde in a wifebeater/tank top. I wonder what that says about me.

It says you should head on over to the SRP forums RIGHT NOW because the sub / dom ratio is, what, five billion? :D

PM me if you want a co-conspirator. I'll help hold her down. :D
 
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