Famous Blue Raincoat by Nessus

[Merelan]

Honestly, I feel drained. I sat here after reading this work of art and felt drained, emotionally and physically.
Nessus, you have written, no, created a story of such imagery and emotion I cannot even begin to praise it enough. This is the first story ever that I am copying and keeping for myself.
I laughed and cried and sorrowed, all while being subtlely aroused. You are a wicked person with a naughty mind. Thank God!!!!!

No wonder it has editors choice and whatever else all those little boxes mean.

Don't let the Bdsm theme turn you away from this one.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=20270

 

[Hecate]

What she said ...

I can only fullheartedly agree to what Merelan said. It is an amazing story that kept me caught till the very last line.

Excellent work!

 

[Natalie Nessus]

Famous Blue raincoat

Thank you for your kind comments

 

[Merelan]

Had to add another post. I just reread this story, for the fourth time. It still stirs and moves me.
So erotic, loving yet, yet..... lonesome. If that makes sense. If it doesn't. You haven't read it.

Oh and Nessus, where can I find a raincoat like this? It sounds super, or should I say.. groovy?

 

[Barbara]

Nessus,
I too read your story. I loved it despite mistakes in presentation [minor] I am glad you got an E but wonder about how they [Es] are achieved. I must ask one day? LAUREL????
On another note, as a word of advice from one who has tried it, I hate to sound like a stuck record but consider writing in serialised form and submitting your work on a daily basis. This undoubtedly builds up a following if your work deserves it. I am a one finger typist and cannot write one per day. My last series ran for consecutive days and was the highest voted story that I have ever done. Erotic Adventures Ch.s 1-5 ran 31 Jul to 4 Aug and was so well recieved by the voters that I have now written further chapters. I notified my readers that:
I would be back at the end of August. [With More]
I love criticism and VOTES [ 120 votes on Ch 5 so far]
I looked forward to their E mails [ I got over 50 and counting still]
I was going for a RECORD of some sort.
Informed them that ALL writers survive on their EGO. [ Be Honest]

Now Nessus, I hope those comments help you and IF you want to Email me and keep in touch I am always interested. I would love to hear from you. No COME ON STUFF.
Email Address is revdickt@hotmail.com

Barbara Anne Adams. G.S.K. From N.Z.

EVERY BENEFIT TO MANKIND HAD IT'S ORIGIN IN SOMEBODY'S FANTASY WORLD AT SOME POINT IN TIME
Quote From Barbara Anne Adams Copyright 2001 [ Howzat for EGO]

 

[Natalie Nessus]

 

[Debbie]

you have mail Nessus! This is a fantastic story
I look forward to reading more of your work!

 

[Guest]

Thank you again. I'm overwhelmed by the response.

 

[Natalie Nessus]

Sorry, that was me

 

[Natalie Nessus]