Family betrayal of son

[Gman1969]

Looking for a story about son comes home from school and finds His father, mother and sisters are going at it. Parents send him away to a school of his choice, when he returns "as a man" to the family home from school or later walking in on family again in parents bedroom. Father only wants the daughters and wants the son out of the way. I believe it was an on going story at least upto 2 stories. Similar to Soul71's stories.

Thanks

 

[Gman1969]

Looking for a story about son comes home from school and finds His dad, mom and sisters are going at it. Parents send him away to a school of his choice without him even having to think he accepts. They do not visit or attend his graduation. When he returns "as a man" to the family home from school/ Military.

He walks into his family home walks up to master bed room and sees mom, sisters and dad (dad is filming) At first they don't recognize him and dad tries to take him down. Doesn't work. Mother said hFather only wants the daughters and wants the son out of the way.

I believe it was an on going story at least up to 2 stories and was fairly new. Similar to Soul71's stories.

 

[Leviathan101]

Looking for a story about son comes home from school and finds His dad, mom and sisters are going at it. Parents send him away to a school of his choice without him even having to think he accepts. They do not visit or attend his graduation. When he returns "as a man" to the family home from school/ Military.

He walks into his family home walks up to master bed room and sees mom, sisters and dad (dad is filming) At first they don't recognize him and dad tries to take him down. Doesn't work. Mother said hFather only wants the daughters and wants the son out of the way.

I believe it was an on going story at least up to 2 stories and was fairly new. Similar to Soul71's stories.

I think it’s ‘Shunned’ by StormAW

https://literotica.com/s/shunned-ch-01

 

[Gman1969]

Yes it is.

Thank you leviathan101

 

[Durken82]

Does anyone know if StormAW is going to continue the series? His chapters are really short, especially Ch 2. I really want to see where this story goes. I'm hoping the narrator kicks his dad's ass, literally and figuratively.

 

[OverconfidentSarcasm]

Does anyone know if StormAW is going to continue the series? His chapters are really short, especially Ch 2. I really want to see where this story goes. I'm hoping the narrator kicks his dad's ass, literally and figuratively.

He wrote a comment under Chapter Two, that he is also developing a Visual Novel Game called "Bare Witness". He claimed to be tied up in finalizing the next Update of that game, and would continue writing as soon as he released it.

The mentioned update happened on October 12th. So, theoretically, he should be back to writing.

 

[Wargamer]

I certainly hope so

 

[Wargamer]

Sent StormAW a message, l hope he replies

 

[PhoenixLord]

He got a few negative comments on Chapter 3 and has ceased updating.

 

[OverconfidentSarcasm]

Sent StormAW a message, l hope he replies

He got so butthurt over the negative comments under his latest submission (that did not read insulting in any way), he disabled the feedback feature in his profile and the comments under all of his stories, and his profile now says "I am entirely uninterested in your opinion".

 

[atam12]

I was enjoying how it was developing

 

[PhoenixLord]

He got so butthurt over the negative comments under his latest submission (that did not read insulting in any way), he disabled the feedback feature in his profile and the comments under all of his stories, and his profile now says "I am entirely uninterested in your opinion".

I actually kind of find that hypocritical of him. If he's uninterested in anyone's opinions, he should continue writing Shunned. The fact that he's stopped is a clear indication that he does care about other people's opinions, in the sense that he's offended by them.

 

[OverconfidentSarcasm]

I actually kind of find that hypocritical of him. If he's uninterested in anyone's opinions, he should continue writing Shunned. The fact that he's stopped is a clear indication that he does care about other people's opinions, in the sense that he's offended by them.

Oh, he never claimed he would stop writing the series. He just won't be posting it on Lit, since, apparently, he can't deal with it if people point out obvious plot holes and continuity errors (that stem from him neglecting to re-read the chapters he posted almost two years ago and simply forgetting what he wrote before).

Now, I'm not entirely sure how the rules apply in a case like that. I know that authors aren't supposed to post teasers and such, just to then tell people to buy the whole book on Amazon. But since Lit still doesn't have a proper chaptering feature, the chapters he posted so far are seen as individual stories.

Anyway, it's not exactly great PR for that game he's writing the story for, that's for sure.

 

[PhoenixLord]

Oh, he never claimed he would stop writing the series. He just won't be posting it on Lit, since, apparently, he can't deal with it if people point out obvious plot holes and continuity errors (that stem from him neglecting to re-read the chapters he posted almost two years ago and simply forgetting what he wrote before).

Now, I'm not entirely sure how the rules apply in a case like that. I know that authors aren't supposed to post teasers and such, just to then tell people to buy the whole book on Amazon. But since Lit still doesn't have a proper chaptering feature, the chapters he posted so far are seen as individual stories.

Anyway, it's not exactly great PR for that game he's writing the story for, that's for sure.

hey, if you ever find out where he's writing it now, it wouldn't be a bad thing to share a link here...if the Lit gods allow it.

 

[OverconfidentSarcasm]

hey, if you ever find out where he's writing it now, it wouldn't be a bad thing to share a link here...if the Lit gods allow it.

Last he wrote was that it's going on Amazon if the finished story "is feasible for self-publishing there". But he also wrote that it's going to be a long-term project and our best bet to get a release date is to follow their Patreon account.