destinie21
Daddy's Brat
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I was hoping to ghet some feedback on my new story. It's the first "New" Idea I've worked on in a while which is to say it isn't part of one of my on going series'. It is however the first chapter in what my be my next set of stories.
For a little background it's a lesbian story between two people who already have an established relationship, a peek into one night of their life. Anyway here's an excerpt
Somehow it seemed unfair, this passion that ran through me. As if now that I was ready she should drop everything for me when I hadn't been willing to do the same for her. So I stood there letting my eyes caress her body, from the tip of her pink toe nails to the ends of her shoulder length reddish brown hair.
Jenny felt my eyes on her and turned her brown eyes to my face. After five years her eyes still made my heart race. She was the most beautiful woman I knew, of course my judgment was clouded by love. Still I couldn't see how anyone wouldn't find her smooth honey brown skin and chocolate eyes enticing. Her full lips seemed to be made for hot wet tongue kisses and although she was lean she was still too well formed to be slim. The curve of her full breasts gave way to a flat belly and smooth rounded hips. All of it was mine if I wanted it, and oh how I wanted it....
Read the story if you want more
Familiar
Regards D21
For a little background it's a lesbian story between two people who already have an established relationship, a peek into one night of their life. Anyway here's an excerpt
Somehow it seemed unfair, this passion that ran through me. As if now that I was ready she should drop everything for me when I hadn't been willing to do the same for her. So I stood there letting my eyes caress her body, from the tip of her pink toe nails to the ends of her shoulder length reddish brown hair.
Jenny felt my eyes on her and turned her brown eyes to my face. After five years her eyes still made my heart race. She was the most beautiful woman I knew, of course my judgment was clouded by love. Still I couldn't see how anyone wouldn't find her smooth honey brown skin and chocolate eyes enticing. Her full lips seemed to be made for hot wet tongue kisses and although she was lean she was still too well formed to be slim. The curve of her full breasts gave way to a flat belly and smooth rounded hips. All of it was mine if I wanted it, and oh how I wanted it....
Read the story if you want more
Familiar
Regards D21
