Fairies?

That’s an awesome take on the fae. That kind of uncertainty - is this that fae or what? - is hard to do well, IMO.
Yes, it's quite a high difficulty concept, and I'm "not an author" at all, I mean, I haven't written anything fiction to completion. I would just drown in worldbuilding just for all those crazy situations that take it apart, all for just trying to get to desired scenes.

I’d suggest at least one mixup with a ‘real person’, where he sees a copy of the woman he’s just cum in giggling at him before scampering off, perhaps, or an illusion of a neighbor’s daughter fades after orgasm to reveal that neighbor’s wife or even the male neighbor if you’re ok going bi.

That's the next escalation, when real women take opportunity to pretend to be the Fae and get away with crazy with or around him. And that's quite a difficult sell as concept too... but, building on my high school experiences, for example, no girl was interested in me until I got my girlfriend, and then there suddenly was much of teasing to the point my GF got convinced I'm fucking half the class, what wasn't true at all, but sorta could be, in her opinion at least. Something of that could play out here, he appears desired by several women to other women who may get interested.

And/or Fae may turn into an uncalled for ally getting girl(s) basically blackmailed into relationship with him, with of course is poisoning it for him too.

If protag tries to ignore the opportunity the fae provides, have her/it up the ante- maybe get police called on protag for peeping on the neighbors? Or more, all while wearing the protag’s face.

I didn't consider her impersonating him, or project making other people appear who they aren't, just straight up her taking any female form she prefers on a current whim. I would also insist she never appear/dissapear in sight, she always enters and leaves a scene normally, but may disappear right behind door or around a corner, and there's no way to keep her captive, at most, perhaps you can get to where she dissapear the moment you look away on a distraction, if that's explored.

If he ‘gives in’, I’d be torn between getting him hooked & wanting and disappearing or to take him thru a flood of sex impressions, a wet dream sequence if you will, and state or hint at his becoming fae as he plays with mortals, perhaps one that the original fae ‘modeled’ for him.

I think there's several directions that could be explored.

One is, implying she's a materializing of his subconscious desires and imagination, he has to get control over those and focus, and do approach real women normally and directly and not exploit Fae as pornographic surrogate.

Kinda opposite traction is to learn to cooperate with the Fae, even if her motivation cannot be discerned. They may become a predator pair, perhaps before he realizes the way to true fulfillment is the above, although I doubt the Fae would ever go away, but there could be a final stable threesome, perhaps with hint it remains open.

As to his own magic, it's kinda tempting but I would prefer it kept at level of him able to recognize Fae (with or without limiting it to "his" Fae), but more feel too much just as is her doing projections of people upon other people, although if you play with this being all mind-control there's an organic question why not.

However, a breakdown of world rules is kinda given and part of the erotic escalation with the Fae going public. She's unaccountable and unstoppable and pretty much always nude and may inadvertently or rather not, normalize at least that in his environment.
 
Yes, it's quite a high difficulty concept, and I'm "not an author" at all, I mean, I haven't written anything fiction to completion. I would just drown in worldbuilding just for all those crazy situations that take it apart, all for just trying to get to desired scenes.
Welcome to the club. :) I think most authors would agree that that's pretty dang common. Only way past is thru!

That's the next escalation, when real women take opportunity to pretend to be the Fae and get away with crazy with or around him. And that's quite a difficult sell as concept too... but, building on my high school experiences, for example, no girl was interested in me until I got my girlfriend, and then there suddenly was much of teasing to the point my GF got convinced I'm fucking half the class, what wasn't true at all, but sorta could be, in her opinion at least. Something of that could play out here, he appears desired by several women to other women who may get interested.

And/or Fae may turn into an uncalled for ally getting girl(s) basically blackmailed into relationship with him, with of course is poisoning it for him too.

Yeah, protag should learn why the Fae were so feared for so long!

Would that action be an ally, or a predator? Procurer, at a minimum, I'd think.

I didn't consider her impersonating him, or project making other people appear who they aren't, just straight up her taking any female form she prefers on a current whim. I would also insist she never appear/dissapear in sight, she always enters and leaves a scene normally, but may disappear right behind door or around a corner, and there's no way to keep her captive, at most, perhaps you can get to where she dissapear the moment you look away on a distraction, if that's explored.

Certainly one possible set of limits, but I'd suggest that the 'ineffable Fae' should have layers of exceptions & exclusions that are observed but not understood. Talk about the black iron foo dog statue in the neighbor's back yard, and make sure the fae never turns up in said back yard. Maybe green or orange is attractive and the opposite repulsive, never consciously considered by the protag but there's evidence in the actions of the fae?

I think there's several directions that could be explored.

One is, implying she's a materializing of his subconscious desires and imagination, he has to get control over those and focus, and do approach real women normally and directly and not exploit Fae as pornographic surrogate.

Kinda opposite traction is to learn to cooperate with the Fae, even if her motivation cannot be discerned. They may become a predator pair, perhaps before he realizes the way to true fulfillment is the above, although I doubt the Fae would ever go away, but there could be a final stable threesome, perhaps with hint it remains open.

Interesting, hadn't thought of the outcome(s) in quite that way. Could do both, even - who can keep complete control of their subconscious?

I'd suggest that there be audience-entertaining protagonist-wrecking complications in learning how to do this, tho' - perhaps getting caught and arrested as an exhibitionist, groper, raper, or the like?

As to his own magic, it's kinda tempting but I would prefer it kept at level of him able to recognize Fae (with or without limiting it to "his" Fae), but more feel too much just as is her doing projections of people upon other people, although if you play with this being all mind-control there's an organic question why not.

Wasn't thinking of that transform as 'his magic', more like 'his curse' as the result if he accepts fae-ness, including all the odd rules & behaviors. Kinda like a succubus turning some guy lusting over her into an incubus, or weres/vampires, etc.

However, a breakdown of world rules is kinda given and part of the erotic escalation with the Fae going public. She's unaccountable and unstoppable and pretty much always nude and may inadvertently or rather not, normalize at least that in his environment.
Maybe. Fae've been playing games with humans here for how long? Do you think they might be able to handle avoiding tech one way or another? Maybe the Fae aren't limited to humans to muck about with and they've learned Tricks to handle technological doodads, perhaps?
 
Yes, it's quite a high difficulty concept, and I'm "not an author" at all, I mean, I haven't written anything fiction to completion. I would just drown in worldbuilding just for all those crazy situations that take it apart, all for just trying to get to desired scenes.
No one's an author until they write something. Even if it's unfinished.

I think you should approach world building differently. Write unlike a book how it works. Build wonderfully complex tales in ways you understand. Short presentations, a mere single line, whatever helps you for and understand the world.

Then you'll put a story in it. Besides establishing a few things, like that there's fae, you'll let the story unfold. The reader doesn't know the full scope of your story, and that's fine. They can feel the rich story, getting fed more of it during.

Even something like the fae you can build in creatively. A simple "last summer we had some pixies roost on the common hall roof, causing havoc if we got too close," would be enough to introduce mysterious elements. The reader now knows there's fae afoot, but isn't overloaded with information. That way you don't need to resort to "there's a thousand fae in this world," then proceed to explain every single one in detail. We get to know part of the world through the perspectives of the people. One might be adoring the idea of the magical unicorn, while the next thinks they are overgrown vermin that has too strong magic, so he can't prevent them from eating their crops.
 
Well, apparently I find the fae too scary to be sexy. XD I give you Belka and his Witchling.

If I got anything wrong about Russia please lemme know.

Also, this is an adaptation to a toy fanfic I wrote for another site's contest about a year ago, but I might write more about them in the future, and I don't really like writing fanfics.
 
Well, if you like dated slang, you have the entire Gay Male category for examples ....

Charlie Stross presents the Fay as dangerous mind-controlling monsters who force mortals to love them for their own convenience.

How about taking the "Fairy Godmother" idea sort of literally, and having a MILF-fancier seduce the fairy who comes to bless some infant, and what sexy blessing the child receives (which only becomes effective on her/his 18th birthday)?

--Annie
Novik has a short story of a mother getting above her station, inviting five fairies to a party to bless her daughter. There is alcohol. There is one upsmanship. There are blessings given that cannot be taken back. At some point this gets dangerous for the fairies because mutually exclusive blessings can rebound on the giver.

Daughter ends up being a warrior queen akin to an unattractive Red Sonja.
 
Well, apparently I find the fae too scary to be sexy. XD I give you Belka and his Witchling.

If I got anything wrong about Russia please lemme know.

Also, this is an adaptation to a toy fanfic I wrote for another site's contest about a year ago, but I might write more about them in the future, and I don't really like writing fanfics.
Have you read Wanda’s latest?
 
Focusing on reading? That's almost as hard as writing. Specially when I'm trying to be a good girl and stay off the internet during the day...

What's it about though?
Basically a court magician to the fae finds a (half?) faerie in a human brothel. And later Mab in that same brothel, due to a tricky bargain by the madame. I don’t recall now if they find the madame’s body… or any of her fluids for that matter.

So I guess some of the fae aren’t too scary. On second thought they all still a bit scary. But some of them still find love. Which is nice.
 
Basically a court magician to the fae finds a (half?) faerie in a human brothel. And later Mab in that same brothel, due to a tricky bargain by the madame. I don’t recall now if they find the madame’s body… or any of her fluids for that matter.

So I guess some of the fae aren’t too scary. On second thought they all still a bit scary. But some of them still find love. Which is nice.
Yeah, I've read a fair number of sexy fairy stories, and that one sounds really good too, but it's the same problem I have with some other stories I have running through my spankbank... Once I go to write it, I start really thinking about it, and then it's not as sexy and kinda ruins the fantasy. 😬
 
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Yeah, I've read a fair number of sexy fairy stories, and that one sounds really good too, but it's the same problem I have with some other stories I have running through my spankbank... Once I go to write it, I start really thinking about it, and then it's not as sexy and kinda ruins the fantasy. 😬
if you kept some behind closed doors scenes just for yourself?
 
From Avalon with Love is my latest story based on a mismatch of fey and Arthurian legend. The Lady of the Lake is the MFC and half the story takes place in Annwn, the Fairylands. It features nymphs, elves and humans in taboo/incestual relations.
 
There’s a story I read a long time ago where a knight was out on his horse when a fairy lord did a Freaky Friday swap with him so the knight would take his place in an upcoming duel. He tells the knight to not sleep with his wife (interestingly while the knight does resist the temptation it never says the fairy didn’t sleep with the human wife), the knight wins the duel and then they swap back, become close friends, and when the human wife dies, the human is married to a fairy princess.

Always thought the story was pretty dickish to the human wife and the fairy wife also takes everything in stride. Also if someone made me do a duel for them, I’d be pissed.

A. When the fairy wife finds out, she becomes wrathful at her coward of a husband and instead of just smiling, she kicks his ass out and invites the human wife or both humans to her court for her to dote on and to balance the books with them.

B. Husband makes it home and his wife has figured out the swap and has the fairy noble at knife point. After the swap, she explains the noble tried to get handsy and she knew it wasn’t her husband immediately. She also is achingly beautiful and husband admits while the fairy wife was beautiful he wasn’t tempted for a second as she was nothing like his gorgeous, strong wife. Wife then invites the fairy wife to their castle to enjoy a bit of humiliation of the fairy noble
 
There’s a story I read a long time ago where a knight was out on his horse when a fairy lord did a Freaky Friday swap with him so the knight would take his place in an upcoming duel. He tells the knight to not sleep with his wife (interestingly while the knight does resist the temptation it never says the fairy didn’t sleep with the human wife), the knight wins the duel and then they swap back, become close friends, and when the human wife dies, the human is married to a fairy princess.
Sounds like Pwyll and Annwn from the First Branch of the Mabinogion.
 
Yes, it's quite a high difficulty concept, and I'm "not an author" at all, I mean, I haven't written anything fiction to completion. I would just drown in worldbuilding just for all those crazy situations that take it apart, all for just trying to get to desired scenes.



That's the next escalation, when real women take opportunity to pretend to be the Fae and get away with crazy with or around him. And that's quite a difficult sell as concept too... but, building on my high school experiences, for example, no girl was interested in me until I got my girlfriend, and then there suddenly was much of teasing to the point my GF got convinced I'm fucking half the class, what wasn't true at all, but sorta could be, in her opinion at least. Something of that could play out here, he appears desired by several women to other women who may get interested.

And/or Fae may turn into an uncalled for ally getting girl(s) basically blackmailed into relationship with him, with of course is poisoning it for him too.



I didn't consider her impersonating him, or project making other people appear who they aren't, just straight up her taking any female form she prefers on a current whim. I would also insist she never appear/dissapear in sight, she always enters and leaves a scene normally, but may disappear right behind door or around a corner, and there's no way to keep her captive, at most, perhaps you can get to where she dissapear the moment you look away on a distraction, if that's explored.



I think there's several directions that could be explored.

One is, implying she's a materializing of his subconscious desires and imagination, he has to get control over those and focus, and do approach real women normally and directly and not exploit Fae as pornographic surrogate.

Kinda opposite traction is to learn to cooperate with the Fae, even if her motivation cannot be discerned. They may become a predator pair, perhaps before he realizes the way to true fulfillment is the above, although I doubt the Fae would ever go away, but there could be a final stable threesome, perhaps with hint it remains open.

As to his own magic, it's kinda tempting but I would prefer it kept at level of him able to recognize Fae (with or without limiting it to "his" Fae), but more feel too much just as is her doing projections of people upon other people, although if you play with this being all mind-control there's an organic question why not.

However, a breakdown of world rules is kinda given and part of the erotic escalation with the Fae going public. She's unaccountable and unstoppable and pretty much always nude and may inadvertently or rather not, normalize at least that in his environment.
Have you read Jonathan Strange and Mr Norrell? The entire book is full of footnotes which reference other books that do not exist. Sort of submerges some of her iceberg that way.
 
Suzanna Clarke (Strange) puts forward the notion that affinity for magic is on a different dimension from sanity. Not inversely proportional, but inversely correlated. So faeries, who are practically made of magic, are also almost entirely batshit insane. Their logic is their own and is not even self-consistent much of the time. Very djinn coded. Meanwhile some of the best human magicians are also a bit nutty.
 
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