Exquisite Corpse

Lauren Hynde

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Among Surrealist techniques exploiting the mystique of accident was a kind of collective collage of words or images called the Cadavre Exquis. The Surrealists were Parisian avant-garde painters, writers, and associates who wanted to use the Unconscious as their resource against the materialism and militarism, among other isms, that distressed them. Led energetically by the poet and novelist André Breton, they would meet daily by the mid-1920s in a Parisian cafe to talk, plan their magazine, cook up stunts and shows, and of course to read their work and play their writing games. These writing games range from those which release the unconscious to more or less direct the writing process--the automatic writing of Magnetic Fields--to those which exploit the chance contributions of collaborators not aware of what their mates were doing--as in the famous Exquisite Corpse writing game. They made writing fun, social, and surprising in what its most apparently 'blind' practise could produce.

The technique got its name from results obtained in initial playing, 'Le cadavre exquis boira le vin nouveau' (The exquisite corpse will drink the young wine) and how it works is: a group of people get together and each writes on cue a particular grammatical structure (adjective, noun, verb, adverb, and so forth), then folds the paper over, and passes it on. Once all the parts have been written, the paper is unfolded and read. You don't know what sequence you're writing into, and you cannot control where a piece is going.


I think the start of a new year is a good time to explore our 'unconscious reality in the personality of the group' (or something) but to try something like this, we'll need to depend on PMs a bit.

I'll sort out the mechanics, but first would like to know if anyone is interested in trying this for size.

If we get one or two really good Exquisite Corpses we could maybe incorporate them in a group poem or a same title challenge...
 
Happy new Year, LH :)

count me in, sounds totally morbid and a lotta fun, kinda like sex on a grave, muwaaahaaa :D

:rose:
 
my best friend used to roust me outa bed on sunday morning and demand that we write automatic poems on his old royal typewriter

trading lines in that haze of semi sleep

if nothing else it made the coffee taste really good.
 
I'd play but my PM box is full. Let me see if there is an easy way to move its contents to my Literotica email box.

I played that game yyyyyeeeeeaaaaars ago, back in Poland, a couple of times.
 
Re: Am I exempt

Angeline said:
cause they published me, lol.... :p

awww, come on Angeline, if anything, that makes you NOT exempt..btw, I enjoyed the article, read it months ago...shall we call you Miss Corpse? :rose:
 
Lauren Hynde said:
[...] a group of people get together and each writes on cue a particular grammatical structure (adjective, noun, verb, adverb, and so forth), then folds the paper over, and passes it on. Once all the parts have been written, the paper is unfolded and read. You don't know what sequence you're writing into, and you cannot control where a piece is going.
Yes, there is more than one such game. The number of syllables and/or accents can be prescribed in advance too. From the last word of a line the ending can be passed to the author of the next line (or of the next line-ending), so that the thing will rhyme, etc.
 
Count me in, please. I just finished steeping myself in books about Man Ray and Magritte - perhaps that'll help me.
 
Excellent! I'm sure this will be fun.


Ange-
Shut up. You're in too. ;)

Senna-
You can create an alternative username and forward your messages to its PM box five at a time. I think that's the best it can be done. Also, you might want to check your 'sent' messages.


It's almost 5 AM, so I'll be going to bed now, but I'll get this thing going tomorrow.

Anyone else who wants to play, just say so. The more the merrier. :D
 
Lauren Hynde said:
Excellent! I'm sure this will be fun.
. . .
It's almost 5 AM, so I'll be going to bed now, but I'll get this thing going tomorrow.

Anyone else who wants to play, just say so. The more the merrier. :D
I think I am interested.
 
Me too... :confused: I think. I've blond roots... not sure what I just said 'me too' to.


-neo
 
Maria, EE, Angeline, Senna, Cat, Tess, Jim, Rybka, Neo, Ice, Echoes, Carrie (and everyone else who wants to play)-

I think we should start with something very short and very simple, just to see what comes out. Later on I'd like to do what Senna suggested, with each person writing a line or a short stanza after seeing only a fraction of what the previous participant wrote, but for now I would like to try the same exercise that originated the first Cadavre Exquis. One word each, totally blind.

What I want each of you to do is to send me, via PM or email, a list of six words (or groups of words that act as one, of course):

1. an adjective
2. a noun
3. an adverb
4. a verb (one that takes a direct object)
5. an adjective
6. a noun

Consider each word seperatly. Do not try to organize them into a structured sentence, unless you want to for whatever reason. They will not end up in the same 'corpse' so it doesn't matter.


How it will work:

I have already chosen my six words.

Let's say the first person to send me the 6 words is Maria, followed by EE, Angeline, Senna and Cat.

The first corpse will be: My #1 adjective + Maria's #2 noun + EE's adverb + Angeline's verb + Senna's #5 adjective and Cat's #6 noun.

The second will be: Maria's #1 adjective + EE's #2 noun + ... + the #6 noun of whoever sent the sixth message.

And so on. In the end we'll have (at least) thirteen corpses. Maybe one or two will make some sense. :D


Ok, this is it. I'm waiting for your word lists!
If you have any question, go ahead.
 
Lauren Hynde said:
Gonna wait till I hear from all twelve of you before posting anything, ok? :)
I have my words but Literotica system doesn't like my email sennajawa@literotica.org and has restricted my activities (the account was saturated at one time; possibly that was the problem, messages bounced; the account is almost empty now).

If you created email accouint, say

    spicy_corpse@literotica.org

or whatever, then it would be easy to send you email.
 
Lauren Hynde said:
Excellent! I'm sure this will be fun.


Ange-
Shut up. You're in too. ;)

Senna-
You can create an alternative username and forward your messages to its PM box five at a time. I think that's the best it can be done. Also, you might want to check your 'sent' messages.


It's almost 5 AM, so I'll be going to bed now, but I'll get this thing going tomorrow.

Anyone else who wants to play, just say so. The more the merrier. :D

i'm not going to be around for a while, so sorry but i'll be exquisitely nonparticipatory.... :)
 
Send it, Boo.


Ange, you're here now, damn it. We can't tap into our group personality unconscious reality if you don't participate. :mad:

6 words. Now. It will take you less time than it did writing that post. (which had 16!)
 
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