"Expert" opinion wanted

rakastuja

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Heya

Tried that volunteer editor thing but no answer so far, and I dont want to wait couple more days if next editor in list might answer... *impatient*

I got a story finished, basically proof read, tested with audience (my friend) and what ever... Still I feel kind of hesitating to submit it. I would like to get an opinion from one or two who have either experience in writing these stories or in editing. I would like to know if I should just forget urge to rewrite it once again.

English is my third language and I need to make effort to write perfectly correct English. That story should be quite good language but of course native speaker probably could suggest some improvements.

My writing style is what it is - same as in my blog. I write from my personal point of view and how I experience things. Style is not a subject of discussion. :)

The story is about my masturbation habbit, or addiction, and while its not a description of any specific day, its still very real and true. I guess its far from average porn story where perfect girl has perfect sex with perfect guy. :p

So if anyone is interested, send a pm or post here.
 
Not an expert, but may be able to help

If you would like me to check your story, I am an Assistant Editor to LadyCibelle, the moderator of this forum. If you send the story to her and ask that she or Captain Midnight read it, I would be happy to take a look. English is my first language, and I can help you with the expressions without changing the ideas.

Captain Midnight
 
rakastuja said:
Heya

Tried that volunteer editor thing but no answer so far, and I dont want to wait couple more days if next editor in list might answer... *impatient*

I got a story finished, basically proof read, tested with audience (my friend) and what ever... Still I feel kind of hesitating to submit it. I would like to get an opinion from one or two who have either experience in writing these stories or in editing. I would like to know if I should just forget urge to rewrite it once again.

English is my third language and I need to make effort to write perfectly correct English. That story should be quite good language but of course native speaker probably could suggest some improvements.

My writing style is what it is - same as in my blog. I write from my personal point of view and how I experience things. Style is not a subject of discussion. :)

The story is about my masturbation habbit, or addiction, and while its not a description of any specific day, its still very real and true. I guess its far from average porn story where perfect girl has perfect sex with perfect guy. :p

So if anyone is interested, send a pm or post here.


Love to read it, both just for the experience of your story, but also to help.
 
First story out there in public! :nana:

Go there and read it.

Thanks for LadyCibelle and Captain Midnight again :)
 
Loved your 1st story

Was hoping this was your second story here lass Your english is better then most native speakers no worries there lass <tho not my 1st lang tis my only one now>... Will keep looking for more stories from u ty
pax
HL
 
Good one!

Congratulations to you, LadyCibelle and Captain Midnight. This is some very good writing, whether English is your first language or your 93rd.
 
CopyCarver said:
Congratulations to you, LadyCibelle and Captain Midnight. This is some very good writing, whether English is your first language or your 93rd.

I would be very dishonest if I said that her story has anything to do with me CC, I didn't edit it. I cannot speak for Captain_Midnight though.
 
LadyCibelle said:
I would be very dishonest if I said that her story has anything to do with me CC, I didn't edit it. I cannot speak for Captain_Midnight though.

rakastuja thanked both of you in her intro, so she must believe you contributed.

BTW, being dishonest is probably preferable to being desehonest or dosehonest--except in selected portions of Brooklyn and Queens.
 
CopyCarver said:
rakastuja thanked both of you in her intro, so she must believe you contributed.

THAT'S weirder than weird :eek: as I have absolutely no records of ever editing her.
 
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