Experienced editor wanted. Teaser inside.

[Beanpole99]

Hi -

I'm an experienced writer in other non-erotica genres. I have a completed story that I believe is mostly correct from a grammatical and spelling standpoint.

I am looking for an editor who can comment on such things as believability and motivation of characters, and plot development overall.

I tend to write for an intended audience, in this case it was my wife. So a woman's perspective might be best although I have met many male editors who can swing both ways, so to speak.

Here is the opening section of the story:

I'm lying in bed waiting. Waiting for my wife to come home from fucking another man - with my consent. I'm impatient and restless and incredibly horny. My mind is filled with wondering about where she is, who he is, what they are doing. Is she having fun? Is he more handsome than me, more charming? Is his cock bigger than mine? Does he know how to turn her on in ways that I don't? Sleep is out of the question so I toss and turn under the cool sheet, our dark bedroom dimly lit by the light from the kitchen that I left on for her.

We agreed that today would be the big day - we've known about it for weeks. Hell we put it on our calendars. Mine just says "Cathy - out" - an innocent description for an event that is anything but. When I got home from work she was already gone, just a note on the kitchen counter saying "Leftovers in fridge - have a good night. Don't wait up!" That last bit is of course sarcasm - she well knows that I won't be able to sleep or do much of anything for that matter that requires concentration. Did I even eat dinner? It's all a blur - my thoughts are so washed in fog that I can scarcely remember the hours leading up until this moment. But I do remember how this all started.

The story deals lightly with cuckolding without any of the humiliation typically expressed. The main characters are a loving couple who are expanding their sexual horizons.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Thanks,
Dave

 

[turner28]

I am an experienced writer myself. I will be happy to assist you. Please add me to your Yahoo messenger as a friend. I will be waiting to hear from you.

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