Exhibitionism

[Richard Flash]

I was hoping to submit one or two stories on the subject of (male) exhibitionism, but I keep getting stuck in reality

In reality, male flashing is awfully quick in most cases, and it gets nowhere near the 750 words. Here's an example of the longest one I have:

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I decided to check out what the real estate rentals market is like here, so I dressed in a (short) t-shirt, a jacket that goes down to cover my genitals, and my see-thru shorts. Then I set off!

There are real estate offices everywhere so they're easy to find. They tend to be in very crowded places, however, so it's a bit scary. The typical scenario would be to find a park, then wait for an opportune moment, and walk into the place with my jacket open at the front. As I have mentioned b4, the shorts are truly see-thru

I went to 6-7 of them in one sunny (but pretty cold afternoon), and I'll tell you about 2 of them:

Just another office. Didn't look anything special. Very busy around the place, and I only got a park about 100 meters away. I feel kind of nervous and excited (you know what I mean) at the same time, and my throat is pretty dry as I prepare to get out of the car. For security (against kids for example) I carry some of the other rent lists in my hand so I can shield my totally exposed cock and balls if need be.

I have a quick drink of water (always carry water coz my throat gets so goddamn dry) and exit the car. I can see a young woman about 20 m ahead on a cell phone, but she does not even notice me. About 15 seconds after that, I turn the corner onto the main street where the office is.

I can see the sign about 40 meters away, and as I get a little closer (there is no one between me and the office), I notice that the receptionist is outside stocking up brochures in a stand located outside the entrance of the real estate agent.

By this time, I have lost all my inhibitions (as you do when you've been cruising for an opportunity for a while) and I "let it all hang out". I have a semi-hard on, and my jacket is wide open. As I get about 5 m away from the girl (19-20, blonde, gorgeous - as these receptionists almost always are), I say "Are they the rentals or those for sale?" (referring to the brochure).

She's halfway bent over and turns towards me, and LOOKS straight at my crotch first, and then up onto my face and makes eye contact. There is no expression one way or the other. She says "They're for sale." and looks me over again as she turns back to the brochures. So I say "Are the rentals inside?" and again she glances at me up & down and says "Yes. To the right".

I then enter the office. There is no one there (that I can see) and so I grab the rentals list and exit. She gives me one last glance as I leave.

A few minutes later:

I park the car and wait for an opportunity. I see 2 women looking in a shop window close to where I am heading. I go for it, and walk past them with my jacket wide open. I am still carrying my paper shield, but once again, it's hanging all out. Unfortunately they did not see me. They were not even aware of my being in the neighborhood, I think. Bummer!

I get to the real estate agent, maybe 25-30 metres away from the 2 women, and as soon as I look in thru the window, I see 2 men at the counter, and a 60 year old receptionist. So I think "bugger that" and do a 180 and start walking back to my car. As I start walking back, the 2 women from before (one about 50, and the other about 30ish and quite attractive - brunette) start walking in towards me down the footpath. So I let it all hang out again )

I see them both glancing pretty severely at my crotch, but they don't speak to me or to each other. HOWEVER!!!... As I am wearing my rearview glasses, I can see as SOON as we PASS, one says something to the other, and the BOTH turn right around and just stand there looking at me walking away from them down the street. They stand there until I am totally out of sight and talking to each other. That gave me a great thrill since I KNOW they SAW and it did catch their attention for sure!

On the way home, I found a car park and reversed parked up against a walkway in a shopping center. I wore a long shirt and my see thru shorts. Then I opened the rear door of my car and kneeled in onto the back seat and waited. To cut a long story (i.e. a few interruptions) short, finally a mid 40s Asian woman came walking down the path. I was looking the other way (but seeing her very very clearly in my spy glasses) and I could see her tongue almost hanging out with her eyes glued onto my butt the entire way as she passed.
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So... my question is: Am I wasting my time (and yours) trying to make this work? Should I abandon reality and go for creativity instead?

 

[sanchopanza]

You probably want a straight answer but it won't come from me. I say go for either. Maybe you could write a story based in reality then one in fantasy. I think you are just too worried about how other people will take your work.

Personally I don't care if somebody says something bad about something I've written because more often than not I have somebody else saying something good about it - it is impossible to please everybody and I would have it no other way than this.

"Am I wasting my time (and yours) trying to make this work?"

That is only if you consider writing as a past-time a waste of time in itself. I know Flaubert said, "read in order to live" and he probably said something about writing in order to live, who knows. Anyway I think you should just go ahead and write, if nobody likes it then so be it, you can still write. I write now for enjoyment, my enjoyment, if somebody else expresses an interest in what I have written than good, if not who cares?

 

[StanleyCuckold]

I wish there were more stories like that - I personally enjoy exposing myself. Only I like to make it look accidental. Naked in a window, short shorts, robe, etc. Let me know if you find a location with similar stories - I need more ideas on how to show-off!!!

 

[Richard Flash]

Thanks for the encouragement. I think I'll take the above story and basically "fill it out" a bit (still real, though). Then I'll see if I get any feedback.

To StanleyCuckold: Exhibitionism is extremely common. I don't want to upset any moderators by suggesting links, but go to google and search for exhibitionism forum or something like that.