TheDR4KE
Breathing the sensuous Om
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This is the follow up to the haiku pruning exercise (http://www.literotica.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=59122) where you were asked to write a 5/7/5 haiku and then prune it down ruthlessly. Non 5/7/5 haiku are also a valid form of that genre of poetry, and that is a useful exercise to distill the real essence of your thought. A very zen thing ;-)
If you prefer 5/7/5 haiku though, that is also an excellent exercise to go through along the way to your best work. Write your 5/7/5 then prune it down ... then grow it back up to 5/7/5 once you've worked out its' heart.
So in this thread I'm going to start by posting the pruned haiku from the other thread and will ask you to rewrite them as 5/7/5 haiku. I'm not going to post the original longer ones, but you can look at them of course. It's better to just move on though.
And don't just look at your own haiku, take any one of these and work it up. That's a big part of haiku tradition too
The original intended meaning may not be clear sometimes, and your interpretation may change what was there -- use them as inspiration and show us what you can do with a fairly difficult poetry form.
(Maybe we should try a sestina next ;-)
Drake
If you prefer 5/7/5 haiku though, that is also an excellent exercise to go through along the way to your best work. Write your 5/7/5 then prune it down ... then grow it back up to 5/7/5 once you've worked out its' heart.
So in this thread I'm going to start by posting the pruned haiku from the other thread and will ask you to rewrite them as 5/7/5 haiku. I'm not going to post the original longer ones, but you can look at them of course. It's better to just move on though.
And don't just look at your own haiku, take any one of these and work it up. That's a big part of haiku tradition too
(Maybe we should try a sestina next ;-)
Drake