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AlphaSID

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My first attempt at making a script.

Eventually I will get this post in the correct area. Sigh.

Hey guys,

So my gf and I are experimenting in BDSM and right now I am away at work. Waiting for me at home is a box of new goodies that I bought online. I gave my gf strict instructions. "Do not open the box!" But the more I thought about it, the more I wanted to tell her. SO. I came up with a plan. I wrote out what I want to do when I get home and I send her a short teaser everyday until I can get back. Its got all the good stuff in there, like rope bondage, blind folds, earphones, crops, flogger, drip candles, ice and hopefully my new favourite, remote controlled egg.

My question, Who has done something else this before and how did it turn out? I am away on our anniversary, valentines day and her birthday, so I have a lot of make up to do. I need it to go well.

The Scene

I keep envisioning you lying there tied, and cinched down. I have taken two of your senses. From this point on you will only see and hear what I want. The egg is inside you, but not turned on. You’re waiting for it to start. I imagine you thinking, "What is he doing?", "What is he going to do to me?” As you wait and contemplate, I start.

First, I want to taste you. I bend down between your legs and I lick your pussy. Just for a few seconds, but long enough to remind you, "You. Are. Mine!"

You were blindfolded when I placed the egg in you, and even though you know what it might be, you don't know when I will turn it on or the many settings it has. The anticipation and desire this gives you makes it hard resist tearing off my clothes right then and fuck you. It takes a great deal of control to keep on task, but I manage.

Next I take the new crop and I slowly, using the corner of the leather, slide it down your naked body. I use the corner so you can't tell what it is. I don't want you to know until I snap it on your skin. I play with the crop for a bit. Letting you smell it. I slap you on your thigh, letting you feel the slight sting. I continue with a few more light slaps, then I turn the egg on.

It startled you, but then I hope it starts sensations deep inside that make you want more. I leave it on for a few seconds, and then I turn it off. Back to the crop. I gently slap your pussy, your breasts one by one. I want to see what your limit is. I want to see you squirm, because I know it will make me smile. The thought of you in this much pleasure.

My cock is super hard now, but I exercise control. I am not done yet.

It’s time to really see you squirm. I bend over, kiss you and tell you, "You are not allowed to cum!" I take the large hitatchi out, and plug it in. This vibrator has a big head and is not meant to be inside, but then you already have something inside you. A delicious foreign object. I turn it on and place it against your already wet lips. Then I turn the egg on a pulse mode. I twist and turn the vibrator against your clit. I leave it there for a minute and I watch you hold your orgasm. Then I remove the vibrator first and turn off the egg. I know you want to cum, but I'm not ready to let you.

I take the flogger in one hand and I hit your pussy. You flinch as you always do and softly moan. Then I turn the egg on again. I place the remote down and in the other hand I take the crop. I hit your pussy with the flogger again, and then I tap your right nipple with the crop. Pussy, Left nipple. Then I use the crop on your pussy. The egg stops.

It’s time for a change of pace. I don't want you to cum to early. I pull the candles out. I light one (The red one) and I let it drip once on your breast. Then I let the ice cold water from the ice cub fall on your opposite breast. Back and forth I drip Hot and Cold! All the way down your side. When I get close to your belly button, I move the drips closer in a v shape until I get just above your wet lips. Then I move upward switching the Hot and Cold sides. When I get to your breast again, I stop and admire the wax on your body. I let it sit for a second. Then with my nails I scrape the wax off. Slowly. Once all the wax is off, I take the vibrating toy and place it against your lips and turn them both on.

I use them together to build up your anticipation. I want you to have your most powerful orgasm ever, and I want to know it was me that brought you there. The egg is on a slow pulse again, and the wand is on its highest setting. I leave it for a few seconds and then I bend down and slowly slide a finger between your wet lips. You are ready, and wanting more than ever. I taste your readiness, and let you taste it. I want you to come now. I want to control your orgasm.

Using the crop, I slap your pussy. This time it’s a little harder, and then the flogger. Back and forth I slap your pussy, watching your reaction each time. Just when I think you can't take any more, I place the wand against your clit and I slide my finger in your pussy and I rub your clit with the wand. The wand, the egg and my finger all moving together.. "Cum for my baby!" I whisper and you explode into convulsions.

I let your orgasm finish and then I take the egg out. My turn.

I untie your hands from the bed, but I keep them tied together. I slide between your legs and quickly and forcefully slide my dick into you. I start fucking you with everything I have and eventually I cum.

After I recover from my orgasm I slowly welcome you back to reality, and take off your blindfold, your headset and slowly start to release you from your bondage. We lie there for a little while, holding each other. I whisper, “I love you!”. You reply with your own “I love you.”
 
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Eventually I will get this post in the correct area. Sigh.

Hey guys,

So my gf and I are experimenting in BDSM and right now I am away at work. Waiting for me at home is a box of new goodies that I bought online. I gave my gf strict instructions. "Do not open the box!" But the more I thought about it, the more I wanted to tell her. SO. I came up with a plan. I wrote out what I want to do when I get home and I send her a short teaser everyday until I can get back. Its got all the good stuff in there, like rope bondage, blind folds, earphones, crops, flogger, drip candles, ice and hopefully my new favourite, remote controlled egg.

My question, Who has done something else this before and how did it turn out? I am away on our anniversary, valentines day and her birthday, so I have a lot of make up to do. I need it to go well.

The Scene

I keep envisioning you lying there tied, and cinched down. I have taken two of your senses. From this point on you will only see and hear what I want. The egg is inside you, but not turned on. You’re waiting for it to start. I imagine you thinking, "What is he doing?", "What is he going to do to me?” As you wait and contemplate, I start.

First, I want to taste you. I bend down between your legs and I lick your pussy. Just for a few seconds, but long enough to remind you, "You. Are. Mine!"

You were blindfolded when I placed the egg in you, and even though you know what it might be, you don't know when I will turn it on or the many settings it has. The anticipation and desire this gives you makes it hard resist tearing off my clothes right then and fuck you. It takes a great deal of control to keep on task, but I manage.

Next I take the new crop and I slowly, using the corner of the leather, slide it down your naked body. I use the corner so you can't tell what it is. I don't want you to know until I snap it on your skin. I play with the crop for a bit. Letting you smell it. I slap you on your thigh, letting you feel the slight sting. I continue with a few more light slaps, then I turn the egg on.

It startled you, but then I hope it starts sensations deep inside that make you want more. I leave it on for a few seconds, and then I turn it off. Back to the crop. I gently slap your pussy, your breasts one by one. I want to see what your limit is. I want to see you squirm, because I know it will make me smile. The thought of you in this much pleasure.

My cock is super hard now, but I exercise control. I am not done yet.

It’s time to really see you squirm. I bend over, kiss you and tell you, "You are not allowed to cum!" I take the large hitatchi out, and plug it in. This vibrator has a big head and is not meant to be inside, but then you already have something inside you. A delicious foreign object. I turn it on and place it against your already wet lips. Then I turn the egg on a pulse mode. I twist and turn the vibrator against your clit. I leave it there for a minute and I watch you hold your orgasm. Then I remove the vibrator first and turn off the egg. I know you want to cum, but I'm not ready to let you.

I take the flogger in one hand and I hit your pussy. You flinch as you always do and softly moan. Then I turn the egg on again. I place the remote down and in the other hand I take the crop. I hit your pussy with the flogger again, and then I tap your right nipple with the crop. Pussy, Left nipple. Then I use the crop on your pussy. The egg stops.

It’s time for a change of pace. I don't want you to cum to early. I pull the candles out. I light one (The red one) and I let it drip once on your breast. Then I let the ice cold water from the ice cub fall on your opposite breast. Back and forth I drip Hot and Cold! All the way down your side. When I get close to your belly button, I move the drips closer in a v shape until I get just above your wet lips. Then I move upward switching the Hot and Cold sides. When I get to your breast again, I stop and admire the wax on your body. I let it sit for a second. Then with my nails I scrape the wax off. Slowly. Once all the wax is off, I take the vibrating toy and place it against your lips and turn them both on.

I use them together to build up your anticipation. I want you to have your most powerful orgasm ever, and I want to know it was me that brought you there. The egg is on a slow pulse again, and the wand is on its highest setting. I leave it for a few seconds and then I bend down and slowly slide a finger between your wet lips. You are ready, and wanting more than ever. I taste your readiness, and let you taste it. I want you to come now. I want to control your orgasm.

Using the crop, I slap your pussy. This time it’s a little harder, and then the flogger. Back and forth I slap your pussy, watching your reaction each time. Just when I think you can't take any more, I place the wand against your clit and I slide my finger in your pussy and I rub your clit with the wand. The wand, the egg and my finger all moving together.. "Cum for my baby!" I whisper and you explode into convulsions.

I let your orgasm finish and then I take the egg out. My turn.

I untie your hands from the bed, but I keep them tied together. I slide between your legs and quickly and forcefully slide my dick into you. I start fucking you with everything I have and eventually I cum.

After I recover from my orgasm I slowly welcome you back to reality, and take off your blindfold, your headset and slowly start to release you from your bondage. We lie there for a little while, holding each other. I whisper, “I love you!”. You reply with your own “I love you.”

tl/dr: "eventually I cum."

do you want advice, or do you want us to read your slapdash erotica? you've posted this several times in several forums and have been made fun of. take a hint, dude.

this isn't an earnest question, you just want strangers to look at your boner.
 
tl/dr: "eventually I cum."

do you want advice, or do you want us to read your slapdash erotica? you've posted this several times in several forums and have been made fun of. take a hint, dude.

this isn't an earnest question, you just want strangers to look at your boner.

Yep I get it. Thanks for pointing that out. Listen, First that was not my intention. Second, I posted it in another forum because I was told it was in the wrong forum. Then I posted it in the forum I thought was the Cafe and was shocked to find it was not there. So I posted it a third time. By bad. I have sense attempted to fix the issue by getting the admins to copy it all to the same discussion board.

As for the story, read my comments in the other board and if you really want to know my intention. Should be clear by now. Or form your own opinion and post freely. Either way, it means nothing to me.

I will keep your criticism in mind when I make future posts. My apologies for offending you, as it is obvious I have.

The point of this forum I thought was for one to come and explore openly and freely their own sexual preferences with out judgement. I am clearly mistaken in my assumption.

Thank you for your criticism. Have a great day.
 
Yep I get it. Thanks for pointing that out. Listen, First that was not my intention. Second, I posted it in another forum because I was told it was in the wrong forum. Then I posted it in the forum I thought was the Cafe and was shocked to find it was not there. So I posted it a third time. By bad. I have sense attempted to fix the issue by getting the admins to copy it all to the same discussion board.

As for the story, read my comments in the other board and if you really want to know my intention. Should be clear by now. Or form your own opinion and post freely. Either way, it means nothing to me.

I will keep your criticism in mind when I make future posts. My apologies for offending you, as it is obvious I have.

The point of this forum I thought was for one to come and explore openly and freely their own sexual preferences with out judgement. I am clearly mistaken in my assumption.

Thank you for your criticism. Have a great day.

sometimes i think my purpose in life is to make wannabe doms have ugly meltdowns. im glad this means nothing to you. i cant really parse what youre saying but its cool that the "other board" "knew [your] intention" :rose::kiss::rose::devil:
 
tl/dr: "eventually I cum."

do you want advice, or do you want us to read your slapdash erotica? you've posted this several times in several forums and have been made fun of. take a hint, dude.

this isn't an earnest question, you just want strangers to look at your boner.

He started in the GB, took a ribbing from them, and handled it well.

It seems earnest to me, and it also reads like a scenario I would (mostly) enjoy. Hope it works out as you intend, Sid.
 
I'm confused by the earphones. If she's got those on, how can she hear you whisper? What are they for? Is something playing in them?
 
sometimes i think my purpose in life is to make wannabe doms have ugly meltdowns. im glad this means nothing to you. i cant really parse what youre saying but its cool that the "other board" "knew [your] intention" :rose::kiss::rose::devil:

Sometimes I think my purpose in life is to overcome the challenges I face by judgemental people. Maybe one day I will be gifted with the knowledge and experience of a season dom, such as yourself. Until then, I will continue to accept the challenges from those more experienced than me.

Again I appreciate your challenge.
 
I'm confused by the earphones. If she's got those on, how can she hear you whisper? What are they for? Is something playing in them?

Now this I can work with. Yes. There is music playing, and I would take them off to talk to her. However, I see your point. Be more descriptive. I will edit accordingly. Thank you.
 
Now this I can work with. Yes. There is music playing, and I would take them off to talk to her. However, I see your point. Be more descriptive. I will edit accordingly. Thank you.

Well, I suppose it depends on what you're wanting for the write. I'm assuming it's pieces of this that you've been sending her?

Have you played with the earphone idea before? Are you planning on working along with what's playing... tempo, beat, etc? Are you familiar with how the music might affect her?
 
Well, I suppose it depends on what you're wanting for the write. I'm assuming it's pieces of this that you've been sending her?

Have you played with the earphone idea before? Are you planning on working along with what's playing... tempo, beat, etc? Are you familiar with how the music might affect her?

Yes its pieces I am sending her. She seems to be enjoying it. I have not tried the headphone idea before, but I do have a song in mind. Its a long symphony piece that we have listened to before. I know exactly what it does to her. Which is why I thought of the headphone thing. I am sure there are some trolls that will criticize my choice of song but.... Its Scriabin: Poem of Ecstasy.
 
He started in the GB, took a ribbing from them, and handled it well.

It seems earnest to me, and it also reads like a scenario I would (mostly) enjoy. Hope it works out as you intend, Sid.

Thank you! I am sure she will enjoy it too. I know if there is something she doesn't she will tell me.
 
Yes its pieces I am sending her. She seems to be enjoying it. I have not tried the headphone idea before, but I do have a song in mind. Its a long symphony piece that we have listened to before. I know exactly what it does to her. Which is why I thought of the headphone thing. I am sure there are some trolls that will criticize my choice of song but.... Its Scriabin: Poem of Ecstasy.

Well, since it's something she responds to, who the fuck cares if anyone else likes it, right? I'm not familiar with it, but I do like the name. :)

I would suggest that you have an idea of the time cues in the music, unless you can hear it well, so that you can use some of the dynamics to enhance what you're doing.
 
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