Excellent 8.5 Story - cuckolding

[gerardo]

Whew I just finished reading "Z's First Time" from "loving wives" section. What a turn on - it had some really great pscyological stuff in it that really got me going.
I had to deduct some points for the anal sex part, otherwise I would have given it a 9 out of 10.
My favorite part was when Z admits that she want to fuck Tom more than her husband. I get a buzz just typing it !
I also like the part where Z cautions that once she fucks Tom, their relationship changes forever, and Larsen becomes a cuckold.
Excellent writing !

 

[gerardo]

Improvment needed

Okay, my story reviews obviously need improvement since this review did not generate a single comment. Or maybe you're all running off to read them and not returned to make an entry. Well, I'll keep posting gems when I come across them.

Hey, that's what I'm here for <S>

 

[dr_mabeuse]

It's great that youtake the time and trouble to review stories here, but you'll probably get more comments if you post a link to the story you're talking about. Literotica's a great site, but stories can be nigh on impossible to find without a direct link, and most people aren't willing to go hunting around for them.

Also, I'm puzzled as to your voting method, because Lit uses a 5-point scale, 1 being the worst and 5 being the best.

---dr.M.

 

[gerardo]

Good Call

Good call

Here is the URL for a great story, Z's first time.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=69408