ex-girlfriend is a stripper

[atariblue]

A group of guys decide to throw their soon-to-be-married friend a bachelor party. They hire a few strippers to spice things up. Much to the guest of honor's surprise one of the strippers is his old high school sweetheart. He gets aroused by the lap dance she gives him. He tries hard not to give into temptation, but seeing her brings back memories of the incredible sex they used to have. Can he resist?

How should the story proceed?

 

[loquere]

I’d prefer this if it were done slow and proper, with the characters fully developed. He sees that the stripper is an old flame, she being completely embarrassed gets her things and runs off. He follows and they spend the night chatting outside while sharing a bottle of something; while the party goes on inside. He kisses her briefly before she pulls away, as a game of cat and mouse ensues.

No sex at first but he starts dating going to dinner with her innocently behind his fiancés back. The night before the wedding he has sex with her and has to decide whether or not to break up with the fiancé who is his boss's daughter and lose his job.

 

[atariblue]

No sex at first but he starts dating going to dinner with her innocently behind his fiancés back. The night before the wedding he has sex with her and has to decide whether or not to break up with the fiancé who is his boss's daughter and lose his job.

I love that spin on the situation. It gives the male lead more of motivation to cheat on his fiancée instead of just doing it and looking like a sleazeball. Maybe he's in a loveless relationship? His fiancée isn't who he thought she was. The job notion makes it believable. He was introduced to the boss' daughter and at first they hit it off but as time went on he saw more and more of her father in her, ruthless and controlling. Yet, he found himself in situation where if he broke it off he might possibly lose his job he fought to climb to over the years. A jacked up situation no doubt, that's how the cards fall.

 

[loquere]

I love that spin on the situation. It gives the male lead more of motivation to cheat on his fiancée instead of just doing it and looking like a sleazeball. Maybe he's in a loveless relationship? His fiancée isn't who he thought she was. The job notion makes it believable. He was introduced to the boss' daughter and at first they hit it off but as time went on he saw more and more of her father in her, ruthless and controlling. Yet, he found himself in situation where if he broke it off he might possibly lose his job he fought to climb to over the years. A jacked up situation no doubt, that's how the cards fall.

Yes, I really don't have anything else to add. This is perfect.
This story seems like it has depth now, not just the typical fuck & go tale.

 

[subwannabe]

I think this stripper, his high school classmate, should be someone he really had the hots for but never went out with because she already had a boyfriend, like maybe a sports jock. Maybe they're even still together and swingers, using her job as a stripper as a way to meet playmates.

 

[Mello_SixtyNine]

This kinda reminds me of an old co-worker instead of an ex. Years ago I was working as a telemarketer and two new girls got hired. One was tall, brunette ridiculously hot, a body for sin, & dressed like she was going to hit the clubs. The other girl, 5', short blonde hair, shy, & cute.

Couple years later my brother took me out to the strip clubs for my 21st birthday. We went to a place called, "Art's Performing Center" in downtown Milwaukee. To give you an idea of the club, Maxim Magazine once described it as a place where the girls look like they were hit in the face with bags of nickels.

So my brother and I are at the bar drinking and I get a tap on my shoulder from one of the dancers asking if I was interested in a private dance. I turn and we recognize each other immediately. I was surprised though that it was the short blonde girl (her tall friend would have been a shoe-in to become a stripper).

Her hair was a lot longer & curled. All-over tan & she was wearing a tiny pair of panties & bra, both black. Honestly, she looked a lot hotter than I remembered her at the telemarketing job. Anyway, it was kinda strange that we just ended up drinking, shooting pool (she ran the table...hot), & reminiscing about that shitty telemarketing job.

 

[atariblue]

Her hair was a lot longer & curled. All-over tan & she was wearing a tiny pair of panties & bra, both black. Honestly, she looked a lot hotter than I remembered her at the telemarketing job. Anyway, it was kinda strange that we just ended up drinking, shooting pool (she ran the table...hot), & reminiscing about that shitty telemarketing job.

Awesome story. I was hoping it was gonna end with a hot lap dance or sex in the champagne room, but nonetheless I enjoyed it. This could be a story of its own.

 

[ericrodman101]

Gangbang?

The problem with the 'stripper at the bachelor party' scenario is that all the guys will want to fuck her. Maybe you could have the main guy get a bit sentimental while his friends start going to town, think about the good old days and throwing in the wedding and running away with her, lots of daydreaming and what-ifs, and then just think WTF, and join in - a sort of unreliable narration with a sense of humour but leading to that old faithful of porn plots, the stripper-at-the-party gangbang, but this one for old times sake! She might even get the punchline and see that it was all going to end messy whichever way it panned out.

 

[Mello_SixtyNine]

Awesome story. I was hoping it was gonna end with a hot lap dance or sex in the champagne room, but nonetheless I enjoyed it. This could be a story of its own.

Bought a couple rounds of beer but I didn't even consider buying a private dance. It would have come off as a pervy move. We worked together for about two years & we started talking to each other like we had been when we were at work.