Ex-GF invites you to watch her & her new BF FUCK

Jbl8668

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So I have an idea for a story & I would write it myself but I'm nowhere near as good as some of the authors on this site. So here is the plot:

Your stuck in a lease & forced to live with your now ex-GF (Julee) after she broke up with you for another guy she met(Xander). Your up late watching tv in the living room where you now sleep on the couch because she has the master bedroom. Around 2:00 in the morning your awoken when she comes home with her new BF after a night out. They say goodnight & go to the master bedroom.

You turn the television down enough so you can hear it when they start going at it. After about 30 mins. You start to hear the sounds of sex. They go at it for awhile as you listen in now hard as a rock listening to her get pounded out by clearly a more dominant & better lover than you were with her. After hearing Xander give Julee multiple orgasms you hear him come out the bedroom & go to bathroom leaving the bedroom door open. You creep up to look in & there she is Julee, your exgf lying face down naked on the bed in a giant wet spot.

You then hear Xander finishing in the bathroom & sneak back to the couch to pretend to be asleep. After sometime you hear the bedroom door open back up & you can tell its Julee, who is very petite getting up to go to the bathroom you think. As you lay in front of the television pretending to be asleep you can tell she has come out in the living room & is standing between you & the television, She asks "You awake?" You slowly open your eyes to see her standing in front of you completely naked. Your surprised to say the least. She then says "I know you listen in intently when me & Xander are fucking just wishing you could see what's going on behind that door. Well I have an idea, how would you like to come sit in a chair at the edge of the bed & watch us?" You are dumbfounded & extremely turned on so you agree.

She has you strip all of your clothes off at the door & now I know I have written a lot but I would like it if someone could take this plot & turn it into a story. Somethings I would like included is the use of a vibrator hitchi on Julee, a vibrating prostate massager that both you & Xander insert, & possibly a sympathy blowjob from Julee after Xander & her finish. I cannot wait to see how this turns out. Thanks in advance.
 
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I think this has the makings of a good story. Would love to read it, unfortunately I am not an author.
 
Thanks. I'm hoping someone comes across it & turns it into an even better story....
 
First, learn to format paragraphs for online display. I did not bother to read your wall of text.
 
Jb, I think what you wrote out is interesting enough. But it is just one small scene in a story, not a complete story. To make it more interesting and complete, you need to fill in some back story about the characters...how they became gf/bf and moved in together...what happened to break it up...and most importantly, what happens after the scene you described? It could go in any number of directions, but only you know the ending.

Once you do this, you may find you are good enough at writing to do the story yourself. Or put it out here and see if anyone is intrigued enough to try it for you.
 
They were introduced through mutual friends & quickly became BF & GF. Within a year they were moving in together. They only broke up because Julee had met Xander & started a passionate love affair. As far as what happens after I have a few ideas but want to see wher this one goes first.
 
They were introduced through mutual friends & quickly became BF & GF. Within a year they were moving in together. They only broke up because Julee had met Xander & started a passionate love affair. As far as what happens after I have a few ideas but want to see wher this one goes first.

Okay... and how does the main character feel about this?

Is the main character jealous? Does he feel inadequate? Was he not into his GF anymore? His perception of events will change the story completely.

If he's relaxed about it, than what you have is something close to an open relationship here.

If he's not happy about it, than you have some interesting tension that needs to be resolved somehow.
 
She broke up with him, he still has strong feelings for her. The main character is jealous that he isn't the one fucking her & as he watches how sensual & hard she gets fucked his inadequacy is both a turn on as well as kinda humiliating knowing he cant fuck her like that even if it wanted to (he has a average size penis with not much stamina while Xander is hung & can go all night. He ends up more into & turned on by his now exgf than he was when they were together.
 
Our MC victim is too pussy to break the lease and move on. And he's too lame to bring his own women home to fuck. He's a luzer. As such, he'll stand any humiliation. The next step: he's put in a French maid's uniform. Does he drug their tea?
 
Does this interest any writers? Please feel free to ask me questions. Thank you.
 
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