Esperanto Assistance

[Otto26]

If you're an Esperanto afficionado I'd appreciate a quick hand with some dialogue from a story I'm working on. Below are the phrases and what I think I am saying.

Thanks.

Jes, sinjoro. => Yes, sir.
Jam nun, sinjoro. => Right away, sir.
Mi petegas vi, sinjoro, fiki mi. => I beg you, sir, fuck me.
Volas sucxi via kacego. => I want to suck your large cock.
Ni petas. => Please (plural).
Rampu al mia lito, sklavinoj. Jam nun. => Crawl to my bed, female slaves. Right now.
Pli, pli, pli. => More, more, more.
Sara, tenu sxia brakoj super sxia kapo. => Sara, hold her arms above her head.
Sternu, sklavino. => Spread, female slave.
Bona. => Good.
Do bonega, sinjoro! Do bonega! => So very good, sir! So very good!
Premu mia kaco, sklavino. => Squeeze my cock, female slave.
Via mastra kacego. => Your masterful large cock.
Dankon por via kacego. => Thank you for your large cock.
Dankon por fikanta mi. => Thank you for fucking me.
Sucxu mia kaco. => Suck my cock.
Iru al via dorso, Sara. => Get on your back, Sara.
Fingrafiku via bella picxo. => Finger-fuck your pretty cunt.
Vi estas farinta mi malsekega, sinjoro. => You made me very wet, sir.
Mi estas kacxa con via cxuro. => I'm messy with your cum.
Cxu mi petas gustumi gxi, sinjoro? Mi petas? => May I please taste it, sir? Please?
Jes, sklavineto, vi petas gustumi gxi. => Yes, little female slave (affectionate connotation), you may taste it.
Mia kojonoj. => My balls.
Puru mi, sklavinetoj. => Clean me, little female slaves (affectionate connotation).
Jes, amasinjoro. => Yes, love-sir (no real direct translation of this).

 

[snooper]

They used to say (fifty years ago) that Esperanto would come of age when someone started writing poetry in the language. I don't think anyone ever envisaged porn!

 

[Otto26]

Well... at least a few people did because there are a couple of websites for 'talking dirty' in Esperanto.

 

[CopyCarver]

The only word of Esperanto that I know is: esperanto.

There's a translator bot online at:

www.tios.cs.utwente.nl/traduk/EO-EN/Translate/

I have no clue how good the translations may or may not be, but it might be at least marginally helpful.

 

[snooper]

There's a translator bot online at:

www.tios.cs.utwente.nl/traduk/EO-EN/Translate/

The URL should be:

wwwtios.cs.utwente.nl/traduk/EO-EN/Translate/

 

[Otto26]

That dictionary is fantastic but it doesn't do a lot (anything) with grammar. I've got several references on grammar that I've looked at but it all tends to boil down to "See spot run" examples. I was hoping there was someone out there with a better feel for the language (not you snooper, you get to make corrections when you edit my work ). Perhaps I'll just go shock the regular Esperanto community by asking for advice there.

 

[snooper]

... (not you snooper, you get to make corrections when you edit my work ). ...

Mi neniam faris tion.

 

[Otto26]

Ke estas mi motivo por posxtanta tie. Mi bezonas helpo kon mia gramatiko.

(Nice point made with neniam, btw.)

 

[snooper]

(Nice point made with neniam, btw.)

De nada.

 

[JerryBear75]

Otto26

Dear Otto,

You MUST (nepre!) learn how to use the Accusative Case. It plays a big role in Esperanto and it sounds terrible (especially to a non-English speaker) if you leave it out. It isn't that hard to learn but it is very important. Esperanto speakers subconsciously listen for the presence or absence of the -n to distinguish subject from object, not word order as in english. A non-english speaking Esperantist in particular is likely to find it difficult to understand you accurately if you don't use it and it sounds dreadful, like never using the plural in english. Please go to lernu.net and correct this.

Sincere kaj Amike,

JeriUrso.