Escaping captivity.

sirhugs

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Hard non-consent is pretty controversial on Lit these days, so how about turning it around & focussing on a victim who gets free.

Does she go to the cops, or exact her own sexual revenge?

If she goes to the cops, does she ask to borrow their handcuffs to restrain her tormentor, or to invite the cop to cuff her?

If she decides to get revenge, what sort ?

How does she end up living happily ever after?
 
She recruits five guys who she knows and will do anything for her. They capture the guy that kept her captive. She told her friends about the nightly rapes and being sold to other men.

They take this guy to a secluded place, tie him up and take turns on his ass. No lube. Then they take him to a known play place for gay men, still tied up, and set him on his knees ass in the air for anyone who wants to use him. :eek:

He isn't found by the police for four days and nights.

Probably won't pass muster here though. ;)
 
Possibly a story in the manner of flashbacks and a kind of Stockholm syndrome.

You keep describing new scenes with new partners. Always a different fetish that she wants / has to live out because this was done to her again and again. And in the flashbacks she remembers it.

Possibly her "new partners" are also newly released prisoners. She has made them the offer to sleep with them after their release, if they are "friendly" to her captor.
 
Hard non-consent is pretty controversial on Lit these days, so how about turning it around & focussing on a victim who gets free.

Does she go to the cops, or exact her own sexual revenge?

If she goes to the cops, does she ask to borrow their handcuffs to restrain her tormentor, or to invite the cop to cuff her?

If she decides to get revenge, what sort ?

How does she end up living happily ever after?

Good idea, and I can see several different directions you might take it. You could, as some of the other posters suggest, explore the former victim's trauma and the chiices she has to make. Another possibility is to make her an action hero: Have her TRY to go to the police, but nobody believes her, so she has to take matters into her own hands, both to get revenge for herself and to protect future would-be victims.
 
Good idea, and I can see several different directions you might take it. You could, as some of the other posters suggest, explore the former victim's trauma and the chiices she has to make. Another possibility is to make her an action hero: Have her TRY to go to the police, but nobody believes her, so she has to take matters into her own hands, both to get revenge for herself and to protect future would-be victims.

sounds a lot like Jessica Jones
 
I actually wrote a story series earlier this year called 'Spoiled Heiress Gets Kidnapped' in which a rich bitch 19-year-old socialite named Harriet is kidnapped from a London park by three bumbling crooks and held for ransom in the East End.

Harriet, who gives her abductors nothing but trouble (not least that they didn't take into account that girls have certain requirements every 28 days), manages to get free by seducing the youngest and stupidest of her kidnappers when they are alone together, before running into the street stark naked, flagging down a car full of young Mormon men and jumping in, where she is transported to a police station to report the crime.
 
I actually wrote a story series earlier this year called 'Spoiled Heiress Gets Kidnapped' in which a rich bitch 19-year-old socialite named Harriet is kidnapped from a London park by three bumbling crooks and held for ransom in the East End.

Harriet, who gives her abductors nothing but trouble (not least that they didn't take into account that girls have certain requirements every 28 days), manages to get free by seducing the youngest and stupidest of her kidnappers when they are alone together, before running into the street stark naked, flagging down a car full of young Mormon men and jumping in, where she is transported to a police station to report the crime.

does Harriet seduce a Mormon? Or a cop?
 
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