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This is “historical fiction”. Partly inspired by this film from India.
This story happens in ancient India – 3,000 years ago.
Young queen – in her early thirties – rules over a small kingdom. She is a beautiful woman, and happens to be unmarried. Her people love her and respect her greatly, because she works tirelessly for their well-being, and has always taken her royal duties very seriously.
On the day of the queen’s thirty-second birthday, her advisors raise the question to her: what is she going to do about an heir?
Yes, “Niyoga” again. So how do they find the surrogate to do the job?
The authorities conduct a tournament – a tournament to which the finest men from the kingdom’s army are invited. Various contests are held, including fencing, swimming, archery, wrestling, weight-lifting contests, etc. The competitors are not told the purpose of the games.
Finally, out of a few hundred initial competitors, two men progress through to the final rounds – an archer and a wrestler. The two men compete fiercely, but neither is able to score a clear victory over the other.
The queen is watching the proceedings secretly, and she is deeply curious to see who will win eventually.
She is delighted when both men are eventually declared joint winners.
She is even more delighted when one of her advisors suggests that she should take both men as lovers.
So, both men are – separately – informed what they are to do. The archer is a cultured, chivalrous man, and he is taken aback when he is told that he must now impregnate the queen. When he is summoned to the queen’s private chamber, he respectfully demurs, especially as he is already in love with another woman. The queen is indignant. She orders him to make love to her, and eventually he does so.
The wrestler is an uncultured, caveman-like character. He has a ferocious sex drive, and has no qualms whatsoever about making love to the queen.
So the queen has several sex sessions with both men.
With the archer, her love-making sessions are very tender – lots of tender caressing and kissing. The archer is a kind and gentle lover, lavishing attention upon the queen. During her sessions with him, the queen is very much “on top”, in control, and after her sex sessions with him, she always has a warm glow, with a lovely, dreamy smile upon her face.
Whereas with the wrestler, the sex sessions are furiously energetic – he is remarkably well-endowed, well-built. There is a lot of animalistic licking, sucking, vaginal and anal penetration and prodding, and spanking and slapping. The wrestler is wild and rough, and he is very much on top, and sex sessions with the wrestler leave the queen feeling thoroughly exhausted, and physically aching all over.
Now, I thought of this as well: I thought the queen would want to “show off” to her friends that she was having wonderful sex, so she would invite some of her friends/attendants to sit/wait outside her chambers during her sex sessions, claiming that she was nervous and that she needed them there for moral support. But as they heard her moaning ecstatically with pleasure, these women would themselves become so intensely aroused that they would all walk off one by one to go away and masturbate themselves to orgasm. Why would the queen want to “show off” in this way? Well, earlier in the story, maybe there might be a scene where the queen overhears her attendants talking about their own sexual experiences with their respective lovers, and the queen, having little time for love herself, feels bitterly jealous. So when she gets the chance, she wants to “show off” to her friends, and does it this way. And, well, I thought it was… kinky. Now I don’t know if that sounds stupid.
Yeah, feedback please. Mainly, how to make this story appealing and arousing.
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This is “historical fiction”. Partly inspired by this film from India.
This story happens in ancient India – 3,000 years ago.
Young queen – in her early thirties – rules over a small kingdom. She is a beautiful woman, and happens to be unmarried. Her people love her and respect her greatly, because she works tirelessly for their well-being, and has always taken her royal duties very seriously.
On the day of the queen’s thirty-second birthday, her advisors raise the question to her: what is she going to do about an heir?
Yes, “Niyoga” again. So how do they find the surrogate to do the job?
The authorities conduct a tournament – a tournament to which the finest men from the kingdom’s army are invited. Various contests are held, including fencing, swimming, archery, wrestling, weight-lifting contests, etc. The competitors are not told the purpose of the games.
Finally, out of a few hundred initial competitors, two men progress through to the final rounds – an archer and a wrestler. The two men compete fiercely, but neither is able to score a clear victory over the other.
The queen is watching the proceedings secretly, and she is deeply curious to see who will win eventually.
She is delighted when both men are eventually declared joint winners.
She is even more delighted when one of her advisors suggests that she should take both men as lovers.
So, both men are – separately – informed what they are to do. The archer is a cultured, chivalrous man, and he is taken aback when he is told that he must now impregnate the queen. When he is summoned to the queen’s private chamber, he respectfully demurs, especially as he is already in love with another woman. The queen is indignant. She orders him to make love to her, and eventually he does so.
The wrestler is an uncultured, caveman-like character. He has a ferocious sex drive, and has no qualms whatsoever about making love to the queen.
So the queen has several sex sessions with both men.
With the archer, her love-making sessions are very tender – lots of tender caressing and kissing. The archer is a kind and gentle lover, lavishing attention upon the queen. During her sessions with him, the queen is very much “on top”, in control, and after her sex sessions with him, she always has a warm glow, with a lovely, dreamy smile upon her face.
Whereas with the wrestler, the sex sessions are furiously energetic – he is remarkably well-endowed, well-built. There is a lot of animalistic licking, sucking, vaginal and anal penetration and prodding, and spanking and slapping. The wrestler is wild and rough, and he is very much on top, and sex sessions with the wrestler leave the queen feeling thoroughly exhausted, and physically aching all over.
Now, I thought of this as well: I thought the queen would want to “show off” to her friends that she was having wonderful sex, so she would invite some of her friends/attendants to sit/wait outside her chambers during her sex sessions, claiming that she was nervous and that she needed them there for moral support. But as they heard her moaning ecstatically with pleasure, these women would themselves become so intensely aroused that they would all walk off one by one to go away and masturbate themselves to orgasm. Why would the queen want to “show off” in this way? Well, earlier in the story, maybe there might be a scene where the queen overhears her attendants talking about their own sexual experiences with their respective lovers, and the queen, having little time for love herself, feels bitterly jealous. So when she gets the chance, she wants to “show off” to her friends, and does it this way. And, well, I thought it was… kinky. Now I don’t know if that sounds stupid.
Yeah, feedback please. Mainly, how to make this story appealing and arousing.
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