Hey guys
For the past few years now, there's this storyline developing in my head 'cept I've been too lazy to do anything about it. However, now that I have a little free time off from work, I was thinking of starting to write my first erotica. The story right now is like a jigsaw, can ya guys help me to piece it together please?
Alright, meet Aaron. He wakes up from a coma with no memory whatsoever - he can't even remember his name. He has a sister, a mother, a dad who died when he was born....none of it making any sense to him. His born-genius best friend Bobby who's being incredibly supportive, Bobby's mum who offers to assist Aaron with whatever he needs. Life is normal, except for a minor
detail - an assassin who is hired by the government to exterminate Aaron.
As life passes for Aaron, he starts to remember glimpses of his forgotten past. But life isn't as normal as he thought it was. Strange, coincidental fuckings; hinting, lusty, suggestive words even coming from his sister - every guy's dream. He finds out that his mum/sister goes to a weekly "Lusty Lesbians" meeting, Bobby's mum (his college teacher) fucking the faculty and her male students even his girlfriend's participation in an urban myth about a group of people granted superpowers and eternal youth for a weekly fuck.
The mystery assassin also starts to appear more frequently; a moving shadow in the dark alleyway, a dark shape at the corner of his eye, even face to face with Aaron when he is alone. Eventually, the mystery assassin captures Aaron and brings him to the government lab. PLOT TWIST: The government explains that all they want to do is assist Aaron in the recallation of his memories. They do so and Aaron's rate of returning memories drastically increases but there is a catch, they ask him to do
something for them: investigate the ghouly howlings of the haunted cemetary. He investigates and finds a sexually-deprived nymph masturbating. When entering the cemetary and breaking the protective seal around the place, the nymph threatened to enslave his life unless he gave her an orgasm. Little did he know however that the military, with their snipers were waiting for the moment when he came and glowed, and shot him when he did.
PLOT TWIST: The military wants to extract the blood of Aaron and recreate it to a strength-enhancing serum. The government finds out after a few days however, and rescues Aaron from the clutches of the military. Aaron is really weak now, having lost a lot of blood and [PLOT TWIST:] the government wacky mind decides to kill Aaron because they realise what great power he has unlocked and decides to severe the liability. The mystery assassin saves him and [PLOT TWIST:] she admits she's a double agent, working for the government but actually overseeing the progress and growth of Aaron. She explains to him that he is the only male Nymphodite, promised to the Nymphodites to bring them to victory once again. She explains that the urban myth is only an extract of the Nymphodites power but their numbers are drastically decreasing. For a Nymphodite to survive, they must fuck and absorb a Human male's lifeforce every week but only sometimes are Nymphodite children born. The mystery assassin herself IS a Nymphodite. She takes him back home.
Back home, Aaron talks about his history with the person he could trust, Bobby. However, [PLOT TWIST:] Bobby is discovered working with the government but for his own personal benefit - he wants Aaron's blood to give Bobby eternal youth. He captures Aaron and brings out his inner demons, the unsatiable sex urge. A few orgasms later, Aaron's sister and breaks her virginity. When that happens, she releases an enormous amount of energy that wakes Aaron from his slumber and sends Bobby flying across the room unconscious. They get back home only to realise that Mum and the mystery assassin had been abducted by both the military and the government.
Sneaking through both agencies and rescuing the *damsel in distress*; calling on all "Lusty Lesbian" associates they have, seducing both male and females and promising to make his girlfriend a Nymphodite, through gunshots, bloodstains and romantic rescues, Aaron and his sis manage to rescue both Mum and mystery assassin.
OK, that's the brief overview, a bit too detailed in parts and a bit too short in others but that's basically the storyline. My problem is filling in those gaps where it was too little informations. Any ideas?
ZANGETZU
P.S. Sorry for the incredibly long post and thanks for your patience to read through it. It's a story in the making so please bear with me. Also, when I write the story, I want to write it in 1st person but I also want to include 3rd person point-of-views. Should it be a mix or should I try to keep it all in 3rd person?
For the past few years now, there's this storyline developing in my head 'cept I've been too lazy to do anything about it. However, now that I have a little free time off from work, I was thinking of starting to write my first erotica. The story right now is like a jigsaw, can ya guys help me to piece it together please?
Alright, meet Aaron. He wakes up from a coma with no memory whatsoever - he can't even remember his name. He has a sister, a mother, a dad who died when he was born....none of it making any sense to him. His born-genius best friend Bobby who's being incredibly supportive, Bobby's mum who offers to assist Aaron with whatever he needs. Life is normal, except for a minor
detail - an assassin who is hired by the government to exterminate Aaron.
As life passes for Aaron, he starts to remember glimpses of his forgotten past. But life isn't as normal as he thought it was. Strange, coincidental fuckings; hinting, lusty, suggestive words even coming from his sister - every guy's dream. He finds out that his mum/sister goes to a weekly "Lusty Lesbians" meeting, Bobby's mum (his college teacher) fucking the faculty and her male students even his girlfriend's participation in an urban myth about a group of people granted superpowers and eternal youth for a weekly fuck.
The mystery assassin also starts to appear more frequently; a moving shadow in the dark alleyway, a dark shape at the corner of his eye, even face to face with Aaron when he is alone. Eventually, the mystery assassin captures Aaron and brings him to the government lab. PLOT TWIST: The government explains that all they want to do is assist Aaron in the recallation of his memories. They do so and Aaron's rate of returning memories drastically increases but there is a catch, they ask him to do
something for them: investigate the ghouly howlings of the haunted cemetary. He investigates and finds a sexually-deprived nymph masturbating. When entering the cemetary and breaking the protective seal around the place, the nymph threatened to enslave his life unless he gave her an orgasm. Little did he know however that the military, with their snipers were waiting for the moment when he came and glowed, and shot him when he did.
PLOT TWIST: The military wants to extract the blood of Aaron and recreate it to a strength-enhancing serum. The government finds out after a few days however, and rescues Aaron from the clutches of the military. Aaron is really weak now, having lost a lot of blood and [PLOT TWIST:] the government wacky mind decides to kill Aaron because they realise what great power he has unlocked and decides to severe the liability. The mystery assassin saves him and [PLOT TWIST:] she admits she's a double agent, working for the government but actually overseeing the progress and growth of Aaron. She explains to him that he is the only male Nymphodite, promised to the Nymphodites to bring them to victory once again. She explains that the urban myth is only an extract of the Nymphodites power but their numbers are drastically decreasing. For a Nymphodite to survive, they must fuck and absorb a Human male's lifeforce every week but only sometimes are Nymphodite children born. The mystery assassin herself IS a Nymphodite. She takes him back home.
Back home, Aaron talks about his history with the person he could trust, Bobby. However, [PLOT TWIST:] Bobby is discovered working with the government but for his own personal benefit - he wants Aaron's blood to give Bobby eternal youth. He captures Aaron and brings out his inner demons, the unsatiable sex urge. A few orgasms later, Aaron's sister and breaks her virginity. When that happens, she releases an enormous amount of energy that wakes Aaron from his slumber and sends Bobby flying across the room unconscious. They get back home only to realise that Mum and the mystery assassin had been abducted by both the military and the government.
Sneaking through both agencies and rescuing the *damsel in distress*; calling on all "Lusty Lesbian" associates they have, seducing both male and females and promising to make his girlfriend a Nymphodite, through gunshots, bloodstains and romantic rescues, Aaron and his sis manage to rescue both Mum and mystery assassin.
OK, that's the brief overview, a bit too detailed in parts and a bit too short in others but that's basically the storyline. My problem is filling in those gaps where it was too little informations. Any ideas?
ZANGETZU
P.S. Sorry for the incredibly long post and thanks for your patience to read through it. It's a story in the making so please bear with me. Also, when I write the story, I want to write it in 1st person but I also want to include 3rd person point-of-views. Should it be a mix or should I try to keep it all in 3rd person?
