Erotic photography

[BlackSnake]

Please let me know what you think of my work

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[BlackSnake]

Click on the image to see the larger images.....no links to porn sites or other stuff....it's my work that I would like you to comment on.....

 

[Darkniciad]

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100514/11/4bed92eb10459_m.jpg

I like this shot, but it feels like she's maybe a little too deep in the water, or perhaps it needed a bit higher angle to better see her jean shorts.

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100514/11/4bed92c23687e_m.jpg

This one's a toss-up for my favorite. The only thing that bothers me is the out-of-kilter bracelet, and that the sparkle on her nose is a bit too bright.

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100514/15/4bedd484ae72a_m.jpg

This one's a bit too dark. You lose her hair in the shadows, though I like the pose.

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100514/11/4bed93103e7e3_m.jpg

And this one's too bright against that faded grafitti background.

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100514/11/4bed933512a6b_m.jpg

To me, this one is just a shade too dark. The pose doesn't come off naturally enough for me. It's a little too plain that the pose is meant to mingle reveal/conceal. I like the way you shot it under the bridge with the sunlit nature behind, though.

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100514/15/4bedcc14c8d65_m.jpg

This one's the other toss-up for my favorite. The only thing that I don't like about this one is the way she's holding her top. Can't say exactly what it is, but it just doesn't come across as organic to me.

 

[BlackSnake]

Thank you a lot. This is the best feedback I've gotten in years. I didn't sigh or roll my eyes once while reading it. Thank you a lot. I do appreciate this!

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100514/11/4bed92eb10459_m.jpg

I like this shot, but it feels like she's maybe a little too deep in the water, or perhaps it needed a bit higher angle to better see her jean shorts.

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100514/11/4bed92c23687e_m.jpg

This one's a toss-up for my favorite. The only thing that bothers me is the out-of-kilter bracelet, and that the sparkle on her nose is a bit too bright.

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100514/15/4bedd484ae72a_m.jpg

This one's a bit too dark. You lose her hair in the shadows, though I like the pose.

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100514/11/4bed93103e7e3_m.jpg

And this one's too bright against that faded grafitti background.

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100514/11/4bed933512a6b_m.jpg

To me, this one is just a shade too dark. The pose doesn't come off naturally enough for me. It's a little too plain that the pose is meant to mingle reveal/conceal. I like the way you shot it under the bridge with the sunlit nature behind, though.

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100514/15/4bedcc14c8d65_m.jpg

This one's the other toss-up for my favorite. The only thing that I don't like about this one is the way she's holding her top. Can't say exactly what it is, but it just doesn't come across as organic to me.

 

[BlackSnake]

This is from today:

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100516/22/4bf0d4fbe59a7_m.jpg

 

[Salvor-Hardon]

I'm loving her hair flip in top right corner. you can tell she's really getting into the music as they progress. Perfect album cover material.

 

[BlackSnake]

I'm loving her hair flip in top right corner. you can tell she's really getting into the music as they progress. Perfect album cover material.

She has a single out called "Lil Bit Of Nothin"

How would you rate this one? You can click on the image to see a larger size.

http://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100513/12/4bec557791c0c_m.jpg

 

[BlackSnake]

I think this one didn't show up before:

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http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100515/14/4bef12e9dd7d2_m.jpg

 

[mrbruno]

http://modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17677601

This one is fantastic! Great pose and light!

 

[Salvor-Hardon]

She has a single out called "Lil Bit Of Nothin"

How would you rate this one? You can click on the image to see a larger size.

http://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100513/12/4bec557791c0c_m.jpg

Tough call.... it shows off her beauty, and gives her kind of a "natural beauty" look, but the shirt is not right. But I'm not sure how I'd change it, other than no shirt, but that's a whole other kind of photo.

I'd rate it a 7.

 

[wildehafer]

They're nice, but they aren't erotic.

What are you trying to achieve and what's the message you want to send to the viewer? The picture has to tell me something. Eroticism should arouse something in me and give my imagination something to go on.

There needs to be more sexuality oozing from the photos to grab me. It can be subtle or obvious, depending on what you're highlighting, but it needs to be there.