Erotic Or Not Erotic

[sweetnpetite]

Help! Which do you think this is?

What lie holds my heart
That I feel truth when I know it false
What lie holds a lovers hand
And lets the false heart beat true
What lie is this-
From who’s capture no 'man can find escape
From who’s cell there is no exit
Only death
More final, more hopeless
Only death
Is darker than this lie
Called love.

 

[CrimsonMaiden]

non-erotic

JMO

 

[sweetnpetite]

thanks crim

 

[brightlyiburn]

Definately non-erotic.

 

[shereads]

Not.

 

[Liar]

Help! Which do you think this is?

What lie holds my heart
That I feel truth when I know it false
What lie holds a lovers hand
And lets the false heart beat true
What lie is this-
From who’s capture no 'man can find escape
From who’s cell there is no exit
Only death
More final, more hopeless
Only death
Is darker than this lie
Called love.

It is what you want it to be. But it might look out of place among other erotic poems.

"What lie holds a lovers hand" - nice line.