Erotic Horror Novella ~ Seeking Patient Editor

[Unsung Muse]

Hi There,

My intended Halloween Contest Story (not completed in time for submission) seems to be evolving into something more like a "novella in progress". I'm looking for a patient and meticulous editor(s) to either "reign me in" (back to short story land) OR verify that there is something larger happening here worth pursuing... ?

It is still in progress, but I've reached that awful "too close to it to see" stage. I'd be very grateful for a fresh pair of eyes and the patience to review/edit in sections, as I continue my struggle to complete it.

Thank you for your time & consideration!

 

[Salvor-Hardon]

I'm a lousy editor or I would volunteer, but I want to keep you on top as long as I can darling

 

[RonClarkeson]

Pm me or e-mail me a chapter or two.

I will give it a once over and we can see if we can work together.

 

[Unsung Muse]

Thanks Ron! I haven't actually split it up into chapters yet...
but I will PM you shortly!!


Salvor ~ you're a doll... good to see you.

 

[Salvor-Hardon]

Thanks Ron! I haven't actually split it up into chapters yet...
but I will PM you shortly!!


Salvor ~ you're a doll... good to see you.

good to see you darling

Wish I could see more of you

 

[Unsung Muse]

Thanks again... I'm always blown away by how generous everyone here
seems to be with their very valuable time & kind words & support!!!

Got sidetracked a little in an effort to submit something for the winter holiday contest, but I'm determined to polish-off this [whatever it is that just doesn't want to write itself] piece of psuedo erotic horror, as soon as possible!


Ron ~ again, can't thank you enough. Hope to have the next section to you soon...
I'm soooo very grateful!

 

[Unsung Muse]

Okay... it's JUST a short story now

[and me thinks i'll be throwing in the bloody towel as far as erotic horror goes]


I'd be deeply indebted to any willing volunteers...
to be quite honest, I can't even tell if it makes a scrap of sense anymore

At Your Mercy,

 

[Toa_lin]

I can give it a look, and tell you what I think. Warning though, I have a tendancy to be very meticuous about things, and very blunt.... A.K.A. I will let you know EXACTLY how I feel about it. I may do so in a gentler way then absolutely nescesary, but I won't beet around the bush. Just FYI. If you choose to utilise me, then I will work diligently to help you get the very best you can out of it, if not, then I thank you for your time and consideration.

 

[Unsung Muse]

I can give it a look, and tell you what I think. Warning though, I have a tendancy to be very meticuous about things, and very blunt.... A.K.A. I will let you know EXACTLY how I feel about it. I may do so in a gentler way then absolutely nescesary, but I won't beet around the bush. Just FYI. If you choose to utilise me, then I will work diligently to help you get the very best you can out of it, if not, then I thank you for your time and consideration.

The more blunt, the better! I'm at that awful
'too close to see' stage... will PM asap. Thank you!