Erin Works Late

[ObsideanWarrior]

This story will be about Erin, a college co-ed who is unfamiliar with the city she goes to school in. She doesn't realize the video store she got a clerk job in is in a rather bad part of town. One night, the owner is sick, and she works late to close the store. Little does she know the owner neglected to lock the back door. Anyone could come right in...and sooner or later, someone will, since Erin is all too visible through the glass. With the back room, those someones could do quite a lot to Erin for a long time, and no one would know...

Erin was shelving the last of the returned movies. It had been a busy day this Monday...she hadn't realized until now what a bitch doing the store closing was. She probably wouldn't have been so eager to volunteer if she had. It was almost midnight, and still there was a pile of movies for the six foot tall blonde co-ed to file away.

Fortunately, the store owner, Wen Li, wasn't particular about dress, so her cut-off shorts and Lancaster U. T-shirt were perfectly acceptable. Her hair was long and flowing down her back. Her body was quite nice. She had a bookish look, and far from the best fashion sense. A makeover would probably have done Erin quite a lot of good. She wore wire-rimmed glasses. Right now she was thinking about the physics and econ studying she would need to do after she got out of this place.

 

[Abradix]

Brandon sat in his dirty little apartment... What a piece of shit his life had become. Aside from his height (6'4) and devilish good looks nothing in life had gone his way. He hated people, he hated his situation... He couldn't even hold down a steady job. Fucking failure.

He looked at the knife sitting on top of his ratty black and white tv... He needed money, he would need to make another robbery attempt. Hopefully this one wouldn't end with him going to jail... He pocketed the knife and began to search for a store that was still open. The only place seemed to be a little video store. He shrugged; good enough, he thought to himself. He let himself into the store and slyly ocked the door behind him.

If things turned bad he could hold the girl that seemed to be running the store hostage... Finally a plan that seemed fool proof... His slid the knife from his pocket into the sleeve of his jacket and approached the counter giving his most polite smile.

 

[ObsideanWarrior]

Brandon sat in his dirty little apartment... What a piece of shit his life had become. Aside from his height (6'4) and devilish good looks nothing in life had gone his way. He hated people, he hated his situation... He couldn't even hold down a steady job. Fucking failure.

He looked at the knife sitting on top of his ratty black and white tv... He needed money, he would need to make another robbery attempt. Hopefully this one wouldn't end with him going to jail... He pocketed the knife and began to search for a store that was still open. The only place seemed to be a little video store. He shrugged; good enough, he thought to himself. He let himself into the store and slyly ocked the door behind him.

If things turned bad he could hold the girl that seemed to be running the store hostage... Finally a plan that seemed fool proof... His slid the knife from his pocket into the sleeve of his jacket and approached the counter giving his most polite smile.

Erin was so engrossed in the stack of new releases that she didn't realize she wasn't alone until too late. She heard his footsteps on a bare spot on the store's carpet, and looked up from her position crouched on the floor. She looked like a deer caught in the headlights.

"We're--we're closed," she said, as she wondered just how in the hell this guy had gotten in.

 

[Abradix]

"We're-we're closed..." The young woman stuttered. She had such a cute voice. And not a bad little body on her either... Maybe he would leave with just a bit more than he came for. "Thats strange", he mused "the door was open... You really should be a bit more careful. This neighborhood is pretty dangerous..." He started back behind the counter. Pinning his prey into a corner. "Perhaps you need a man here to protect you from the kinds of people that do the sorts of things you hear about on the news?" He took another step, "Robberies" closer, "Rapes" closer, "murders..." his voice trailed off...He was close enough to smell her. It had been a long time since he had a woman and she smelled so good... Like jasmine... "Would you object to be sticking around?" He smiled as he ran his thumb over the blade of the knife, showing just a tiny bit of it outside his sleeve but not enough to make her sure what it was. Sticking around...He smiled...Even a mind as simple as his enjoyed a good pun

 

[ObsideanWarrior]

"We're-we're closed..." The young woman stuttered. She had such a cute voice. And not a bad little body on her either... Maybe he would leave with just a bit more than he came for. "Thats strange", he mused "the door was open... You really should be a bit more careful. This neighborhood is pretty dangerous..." He started back behind the counter. Pinning his prey into a corner. "Perhaps you need a man here to protect you from the kinds of people that do the sorts of things you hear about on the news?" He took another step, "Robberies" closer, "Rapes" closer, "murders..." his voice trailed off...He was close enough to smell her. It had been a long time since he had a woman and she smelled so good... Like jasmine... "Would you object to be sticking around?" He smiled as he ran his thumb over the blade of the knife, showing just a tiny bit of it outside his sleeve but not enough to make her sure what it was. Sticking around...He smiled...Even a mind as simple as his enjoyed a good pun

A frightened Erin edged backwards as he advanced. This was not looking good. This guy seemed...well, like his mental health was in serious question. She struggled to find words that would not incite him. Looking around to see if he was alone or part of a larger group, she forced herself to look him in the eye.

"Look...I don't want any trouble. There's not enough in the till to make robbing this place worthwhile. It's a video store, for goodness' sake, and the proprietor takes everything out of the till except the change. There might be ten bucks in loose change. That's it. So why don't you just leave and I promise I won't tell anyone you were here. No harm, no foul. Hey, everyone's gotta make a living."

Her eyes strayed nervously toward what she thought was a knife in his sleeve. "Just take what you want and leave before someone out there sees you, okay?"

 

[Abradix]

A frightened Erin edged backwards as he advanced. This was not looking good. This guy seemed...well, like his mental health was in serious question. She struggled to find words that would not incite him. Looking around to see if he was alone or part of a larger group, she forced herself to look him in the eye.

"Look...I don't want any trouble. There's not enough in the till to make robbing this place worthwhile. It's a video store, for goodness' sake, and the proprietor takes everything out of the till except the change. There might be ten bucks in loose change. That's it. So why don't you just leave and I promise I won't tell anyone you were here. No harm, no foul. Hey, everyone's gotta make a living."

Her eyes strayed nervously toward what she thought was a knife in his sleeve. "Just take what you want and leave before someone out there sees you, okay?"

He smiled... The chase was the one thing in the world he truly loved. This scared little girl was providing more than enough fun. He could toy with her for hours. "Perhaps I'm not here for money... Maybe it was that long beautiful hair and that sweet little body of yours that dragged me in... What would you say if I asked you out for a drink sometime?" He gave another leering smile. "Don't you find me attractive?...I know I like you already."

 

[ObsideanWarrior]

He smiled... The chase was the one thing in the world he truly loved. This scared little girl was providing more than enough fun. He could toy with her for hours. "Perhaps I'm not here for money... Maybe it was that long beautiful hair and that sweet little body of yours that dragged me in... What would you say if I asked you out for a drink sometime?" He gave another leering smile. "Don't you find me attractive?...I know I like you already."

Erin shuddered at this Chinese man's words. She really wished he would just take the money. This was going in a very bad direction. "I'm sorry...I don't mean to burst your bubble or say you're ugly--you're not--but you're just not my type. Okay? Nothing personal. Now please, just take the money and go." Her eyes darted wildly around. She was getting close to panic at this strange Asian man edging her up against the returns counter. "My...my roommate, she'll be by to pick me up in a few minutes."

 

[Abradix]

Erin shuddered at this Chinese man's words. She really wished he would just take the money. This was going in a very bad direction. "I'm sorry...I don't mean to burst your bubble or say you're ugly--you're not--but you're just not my type. Okay? Nothing personal. Now please, just take the money and go." Her eyes darted wildly around. She was getting close to panic at this strange Asian man edging her up against the returns counter. "My...my roommate, she'll be by to pick me up in a few minutes."

Brandon was hurt... Most women found him at least somewhat attractive... This cocky little bitch had to be a racist. His hate for humanity was fueled just a bit more, and she would pay. "Your roommate might not even see us, with this counter here I feel as safe as could be...But that doesn't seem to be the case for you, don't I make you feel safe? Even if I'm an ugly piece of shit not fit to be a lover I could at least make you feel somewhat protected..." he reached his hand to her cheek and to his surprise she didn't back away. He looked behind her, she was totally against the counter. Not a damn place to go... He made sure a bit of the blade rubbed against her cheek, he made sure it didn't cut but he wanted her to suspect a bit more that it was there. "You've said there isn't enough money in the register to bother taking... But I didn't come here with the intent of leaving with nothing" he took his hand away from her cheek "so give me something to leave with...Tell me what I can take..." his heart raced as he saw the fear in the small white womans eyes...The feeling of power was the best feeling in the world. Nothing else could match it.

 

[ObsideanWarrior]

Erin looked desperate as her ass touched the counter. Nowhere to go. "What--what do you want from me," she asked, stammering. She realized the Asian was right about the counter...if they were to duck behind it, no one outside would see. She hoped he didn't realize the full implications of that.

"You're--you're not an ugly piece of shit, okay. You're not my type is all. I'm a college student. You probably like to party, get wild and crazy. That's not me. I'd probably bore you." She couldn't believe she was opening up to this guy at all, but... "And I'm also not into robbing video stores. just a small personal preference. But to each his own."

 

[Abradix]

Erin looked desperate as her ass touched the counter. Nowhere to go. "What--what do you want from me," she asked, stammering. She realized the Asian was right about the counter...if they were to duck behind it, no one outside would see. She hoped he didn't realize the full implications of that.

"You're--you're not an ugly piece of shit, okay. You're not my type is all. I'm a college student. You probably like to party, get wild and crazy. That's not me. I'd probably bore you." She couldn't believe she was opening up to this guy at all, but... "And I'm also not into robbing video stores. just a small personal preference. But to each his own."

A robbery crack as well? This smart ass was getting what was coming to her... With one quick move he grabbed the back of her head by the hair. "I know you aren't a stupid girl... You know some of the things I could take. Some things a bit easier than others but anything worth having is worth working for..." He slid the knife out of his sleeve and put the girl on her knees. "You were right that I like to get wild... But everyone has a wild side. Show me your wild side you little whore."

 

[ObsideanWarrior]

"I...I don't have a wild side," Erin stammered. This wasn't going the way she wanted it to. Everything she said just seemed to rub the man the wrong way. But she knew she had to at least throw the man a bone. Something to satisfy him. She looked up at him, a tear welling in her eye. The overhead fluorescent lights of the video store almost turned him into a shadow standing baove her. Her eyes flitted to the knife. "Look...if I show you something you like, will you just leave? Okay?"

 

[Abradix]

The man smiled... Amused by the girls deperation. "I'll consider leaving if its something I like... But if I can't live without whatever it is you show me I might need to take it with me." He smiled and brandished the knife, running it over her collar bone and letting her hair go.

 

[ObsideanWarrior]

Erin's eyes strayed to the knife. She looked around, as if expecting someone to appear any moment. There was only one window visible from back behind the counter, and a bush did a decent job of covering it. Then, with clear reluctance, the young white college girl lifted up her T-shirt. She had not been wearing a bra.

The Asian's eyes feasted on some ample, nicely-shaped breasts. He hadn't seen a rack like this in awhile. Young, firm, full, with pointy little nipples on the end. She looked up at him. "Happy now?" She looked up expectantly.

 

[Abradix]

The knife found its way down her collar bone to her tits... He stared and felt his pants becoming a bit tighter. He used the back end of the knife to trace around her nipples slowly. He smiled and looked down at the girl, she looked exactly the way he wanted her to. Ashamed, embarrassed...There was no lust whatsoever in her eyes. She felt toward him the way he did toward the world and it felt good that someone could finally have even the smallest sense of his pain. "Well thats a good start... and I do like what I see,just not enough to make me leave just yet. I happen to know you have a few other things that I might like to see... And I plan on seeing them one way or the other." The knife found its way to her shoulder and he gave her a small nick. "Now show me what else you have for me..."

 

[ObsideanWarrior]

Erin had been hopeful at first...but at his words, she knew he would not be satified with a mere flash. She trembled. She thought about begging and pleading, but there was a determination in his eyes. And the knife... She tried to look him in the eye but couldn't.

Wordlessly, she reached down and unsnapped her shorts...standing back up a little. The counter hid her from the chest down. She reached over to the wall and flicked a switch. The lights dimmed. Before she lowered her shorts, she said "There's a...a back room. I don't want anybody to see me...naked."

 

[Abradix]

Erin had been hopeful at first...but at his words, she knew he would not be satified with a mere flash. She trembled. She thought about begging and pleading, but there was a determination in his eyes. And the knife... She tried to look him in the eye but couldn't.

Wordlessly, she reached down and unsnapped her shorts...standing back up a little. The counter hid her from the chest down. She reached over to the wall and flicked a switch. The lights dimmed. Before she lowered her shorts, she said "There's a...a back room. I don't want anybody to see me...naked."

Brandon smiled... He knew what he was doing was sick, wrong... And he reveled in it. "Lead the way pet..." he said with a sick grin as he prodded her into action with his blade. She walked in front of him and he walked behind, one hand steadily holding his knife and the other massaging his cock through his jeans. "And this time you better fucking look at me... I want to see the shame in your eyes, I want to know you know what a naughty girl you're being.

 

[ObsideanWarrior]

Erin shivered as the Asian man led her to the back room. It was relatively clean, as storage rooms went, with two light bulbs above it. The outer door was closed. As she walked ahead, the Asian man clicked the door shut behind her. The click of the door echoed in the room. There were a couple pallets containing new releases not on the shelves yet. There was a pile of bubble-wrap and foam.

And her, and him. There was lust in his eyes. And fear in hers.

She saw him stroking himself through his jeans. It disgusted her, but Erin knew there was nothing she could do. So, she lowered the zipper on her shorts. They fell to the concrete floor with a jingle of keys and loose change. She was wearing blue silk panties. After a moment's hesitation, they came off too. Her snatch was almost as blonde as her hair. She stood before him, smooth white skin pale in the light...

 

[Abradix]

He looked for a lock on this door too but didn't find one... He looked the young girl up and down and felt his cock begin to throb. The harder he stroked it the more it needed to be released. He grabbed the girl by the arm and pulled her closer, that scent again... Jasmine. It drove him nuts but he kept from taking her right there on the cold, hard floor. He grabbed her by the jaw and forced her to look him into the eyes, his eyes narrowed even further and he held the knife hard against her throat. "I know even girls as frigid as you have fantasies...I want to know what they are. Tell me your hopes, your dreams... Are you a virgin? Did you want to save yourself til marriage? Do you know thats never going to fucking happen?" He gave a harsh laugh that echoed off the walls... The room fell silent again and he waited for his new toy to speak.

 

[Abradix]

Bump?

 

[ObsideanWarrior]

Bump?

OOC: Oh, bump THIS...I've been slaving away on a last-minute manuscript--a fucking SCREENPLAY, tres boring--for a fussy client for three friggin days now...

IC: "Saving myself," Erin stammered. Getting words through her mouth was like pushing on string...it all balled up, useless. "I...wasn't thinking about sex. Okay? I--I was thinking about life. You know, going to college, getting a degree, getting out of this--this shithole of a town. Not having a knife at my throat. Goddam it. It's the convenience-store clerks that are supposed to get robbed. This is a video store. We still rent VHS for God's sake." Erin began to cry.

 

[Abradix]

OOC: Well I'm glad to see ya back. I was totally enjoying this thread. But ya still owe me an email as well =P

IC: Brandon laughed at the young girls tears. With her head in his hands like this he could see the little droplets forming slowly in her eye and then sliding down her face as they began thier journey to the floor. He loved it. "You know... You might not need to die tonight." He continued exploring her body with the knife. "That is... If you know how to follow directions. Now kiss me." He smiled as he saw the reluctance in her eyes, it was like a drug. He couldn't wait for either the forced kiss or the refusal... In either case he had big plans for this girl.

 

[ObsideanWarrior]

Tears streaming down her face, Erin tried to look at the Asian. "If--if you're going to rape me, could you just get it over with?" She looked down nervously as the knife moved across her chest. "Just put the knife down. Okay?" For her, this was a nightmare...and one she had never expected to have happen to her, not in a million years. "Just take what you want from me and leave, you monster."

 

[Abradix]

He grabbed the girl by the back of the head and put her on her knees. "I don't think you are grasping the gravity of this situation... I can kill you on nothing but a fucking whim." He set the knife under his foot and licked a finger on his free hand. He slid it inside her and smiled "Admit to me how much you're loving this."

 

[ObsideanWarrior]

"What do you want?" Erin's voice was almost a scream as this psychotic (at least in her estimation) Asian man interrogated her. Though she was not especially hip and savvy when it came to sex, Erin was not utterly ignorant either. She had an idea of what Brandon wanted. It just hadn't totally sank in yet. But she saw the bulge in his pants.

Gingerly, as if about to pet a shark, Erin reached up to his zipper, beginning to pull it down with trembling hands.

 

[Abradix]

Brandon slid his pants and boxers down with one movement. He stood proud and let the young girl see exactly what she was about to need to deal with. He turned his hand holding her hair into gentle strokes through her hair. She finally accepted her fate... He wondered what this girl would be like in her regular life... A struggling college student, just trying to pay the bills and get her life on the road. He felt a tinge of guilt but it only made his cock throb a bit harder... "Whats your next move?" he smiled.

OOC: I was just offered phone sex... Impossible to pass that up so I'll continue this tommorow, or tonight if I'm not to out of it.