I don't know if you know it or not but your last effort is a rip-off of a Dean Koontz novel called "Night Chills". Try to be a little more original next time.
Eight_Ball
Thanx for your comments, someone else mentioned that the story resembled work from Dean Koontz as well. Believe it or not I have not read "Night Chills" but will be sure to now.
As for being original next time, i have other stories on this site, perhaps you would like to take a look at them. I don't remember reading any of your work here.
