Enchanted

SisterSteel

Virgin
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Aug 1, 2010
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Oh erotic wizard
Enchant me with carnal sorcery,
Ravish my loins with the star dust of ecstasy,
Quivering limbs long for your touch, so sublime,
Lost in a euphoria that transcends space and time,
Your manhood brands me with its scorching fire,
Our union an elixir of lust and desire,
Lifeless and bare I lay on my bed,
Tormented by your sin that plagues my head,
Stripped of garment and honor, oh I wish I could be,
Tremulous, sanguine flesh with you inside me,
Smeared crimson, silk sheets, a virgin enslaved,
My demise by your tongue, so often craved,
Pretense, logic and all reason aside,
My infatuation for you I cannot hide,
Fact or fiction, false or true,
To lose myself eternally in all that is you,
Be it bitter sweet promise, or the trickery of men,
Caress me, kiss me and rape me again....


:rose:
 
For rhyming couplets your meter is pretty good although it wavers here and there and none of your end rhymes are too forced. All in all an erotic piece so hope you keep posting and also try other branches of poetry without the rhyme
 
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