Looking at the new submissions today, 3/28, I found a new DG Hear that reinforces my admiration for a fine writer; no shit (pun intended; read the story). And who should be going down to the woods today (but not for the teddybears' picnic) but Penn Lady, kicking off the outdoor sex season with another superlative outing (pun not intended, these characters are straight)? And Surely's back with more of the Monroe saga, as ol' Terry (tie that lady down!) keeps the temp on "high". Way to go, guys! Keep 'em coming (pun definitely intended)!
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Surely, always glad to oblige a lady, especially when she turns out stuff as good as Perils of Plagiarism.
PS- If you're into Anglo-Saxon grunge, take a peek at Miss Lisa Jones' latest: "The Garage."
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Surely, An Even Better Explanation
is that I have entirely identified you with your character. You made Terry so real that the difference between author and character dissolved in my mind. It reminds me of a story I heard from the widow of an actor. Her late husband had played a particularly obnoxious character in a long-running, extremely popular television series for the entire run of the show. She said people would ask her, "How can you be married to X?" She replied, "I'm not married to X, I'm married to Y and he's nothing like X." A believable character, whether written or acted, makes one suspend disbelief; that's the mark of great art. And you did it with Terry in Perils of Plagiarism--keep writing!
is that I have entirely identified you with your character. You made Terry so real that the difference between author and character dissolved in my mind. It reminds me of a story I heard from the widow of an actor. Her late husband had played a particularly obnoxious character in a long-running, extremely popular television series for the entire run of the show. She said people would ask her, "How can you be married to X?" She replied, "I'm not married to X, I'm married to Y and he's nothing like X." A believable character, whether written or acted, makes one suspend disbelief; that's the mark of great art. And you did it with Terry in Perils of Plagiarism--keep writing!
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More Good Stuff
Recently (writing as of 4/27), some real stormers. SydneyBlake's Ch 3 in "How to Save a Life" is a super-five, a real gut-grabber; super good writing! For a real good stroker, check out AmazingGrayce's "Have Tunes, Will Travel". And if you like your BDSM dark and dirty, try Miss Lisa Jones' "Gotcha" series; Ch 6 posted a day or two ago. It's a bit strong for my taste, but others may get off on it.
Go, you writers! Keep on writing!
PS- Advertising. Check out my story "The Sting", posted 4/26.
Recently (writing as of 4/27), some real stormers. SydneyBlake's Ch 3 in "How to Save a Life" is a super-five, a real gut-grabber; super good writing! For a real good stroker, check out AmazingGrayce's "Have Tunes, Will Travel". And if you like your BDSM dark and dirty, try Miss Lisa Jones' "Gotcha" series; Ch 6 posted a day or two ago. It's a bit strong for my taste, but others may get off on it.
Go, you writers! Keep on writing!
PS- Advertising. Check out my story "The Sting", posted 4/26.
SA Penn Lady's Morning Sun
It's well-known by now that I worship Penn Lady's work. So I'll spare everyone the hyperbole my enthusiasm generates. Her latest effort Morning Sun is sweet, erotic, gentle and beautiful, and includes a blasting good fuck. My kind of story by a truly gifted writer.
It's well-known by now that I worship Penn Lady's work. So I'll spare everyone the hyperbole my enthusiasm generates. Her latest effort Morning Sun is sweet, erotic, gentle and beautiful, and includes a blasting good fuck. My kind of story by a truly gifted writer.
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Hey estrogen!
Thanks for the mention (from a while back, but only seeing it now). RL has kept me uber busy and sleep deprived and damn bitchy these past few weeks, but Chapter 6 is getting closer to being finished. I hope to submit in a day or two!
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Thanks for the mention (from a while back, but only seeing it now). RL has kept me uber busy and sleep deprived and damn bitchy these past few weeks, but Chapter 6 is getting closer to being finished. I hope to submit in a day or two!
Syd
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Grandmaster dweaver 999 is Back
as of 5/30, with Galactic Whore Ch 1. Sci-fi/fantasy isn't my genre, so I pass on commenting (and I wouldn't dare quibble one of the all-time greats, especially in a genre with which I'm unfamiliar). But now I know why I haven't gotten "A New Birth of Freedom Ch 2" licensed--Grandmaster dweaver999 is writing his own stories.
as of 5/30, with Galactic Whore Ch 1. Sci-fi/fantasy isn't my genre, so I pass on commenting (and I wouldn't dare quibble one of the all-time greats, especially in a genre with which I'm unfamiliar). But now I know why I haven't gotten "A New Birth of Freedom Ch 2" licensed--Grandmaster dweaver999 is writing his own stories.
June 8, And All's Well
HoHumMum is back with "Back to Haunt Me Ch 1", and Mum's got the ol' groove back, as Janie and Mike keep it all in the family. Not technically excellent, but potentially hot and the premise is interesting. A real recovery from "Jamie's Needs".
And a hot debut by LuciousLoneliness, "The Stranded Motorist". Sheriff's Deputy Liz discovers that helping Janie when her car dies leads to a lot more than simple "thank you." Good hot sex, with real characters.
HoHumMum is back with "Back to Haunt Me Ch 1", and Mum's got the ol' groove back, as Janie and Mike keep it all in the family. Not technically excellent, but potentially hot and the premise is interesting. A real recovery from "Jamie's Needs".
And a hot debut by LuciousLoneliness, "The Stranded Motorist". Sheriff's Deputy Liz discovers that helping Janie when her car dies leads to a lot more than simple "thank you." Good hot sex, with real characters.
On a Sad Note
Surely Wilder announced he's taking down his stories and checking out of Literotica. I had my quibbles with Perils of Plagiarism, but his talent and inventiveness were never in question. I'm really sorry he isn't going to finish the series.
I wish him the best of luck in all his future endeavors.
Surely Wilder announced he's taking down his stories and checking out of Literotica. I had my quibbles with Perils of Plagiarism, but his talent and inventiveness were never in question. I'm really sorry he isn't going to finish the series.
I wish him the best of luck in all his future endeavors.
Grandmaster dweaver999 has licensed the next chapter in my A New Birth of Freedom series, and I have submitted Ch 2 for publication. I'd appreciate feedback. I know I have a different view of Valerie and Sally and Charles (and especially Nadine, although she doesn't appear in this chapter), so I'd especially like criticism of how I handle characterization.
Return of Two Professionals
BackyardBottomslash is back from a long layoff, but has it altogether right with "Finally", hot and bittersweet. And michchick98's "Midnight Encounter" is hot, interracial, fast-paced and a top-grade stroker. Good going!
And I've got a "Celebrities" story about a world-class oarswoman just submitted, called "Stroke! Stroke! Stroke!" Hope for some feedback, and hope to avoid the one-bombs.
BackyardBottomslash is back from a long layoff, but has it altogether right with "Finally", hot and bittersweet. And michchick98's "Midnight Encounter" is hot, interracial, fast-paced and a top-grade stroker. Good going!
And I've got a "Celebrities" story about a world-class oarswoman just submitted, called "Stroke! Stroke! Stroke!" Hope for some feedback, and hope to avoid the one-bombs.
Syd Does It Again!
Ch 7 of "How to Save a Life" just posted, and Sydney Blake has brought off another episode in a stormer of a series. As I commented publicly, I was worried that the lesbian sex episode in Ch 6 had been dragged in to heat up the story and cover up a want of invention, but Syd brought off a super recovery, and is really on a roll. Good stuff, solid characterization and solid plotting.
Ch 7 of "How to Save a Life" just posted, and Sydney Blake has brought off another episode in a stormer of a series. As I commented publicly, I was worried that the lesbian sex episode in Ch 6 had been dragged in to heat up the story and cover up a want of invention, but Syd brought off a super recovery, and is really on a roll. Good stuff, solid characterization and solid plotting.
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