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paolorossi88

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Hi all,
Long time reader first time poster...
Anyway I read this great great story a few years ago but I have not forgotten about the title or the author of this story. I am hoping to check back if he/she has any new stories since then. Would appreciate if you can let me know the name of the story or the author. Many thanks in advance.

This is the first few paragraph of the story:

"David Stocker was working in his study going over a company's investment portfolio. He has been a partner for a commercial investment firm for 15 years. David was very conservative, but enjoyed spending his money like anyone else although not foolishly.

David, now 51, was content with his upscale life-style, which was boring at times. He has been married to his second, much younger, wife, Janie for 2 years. She turned 28 three months ago and just fished her Master's degree in archeological science. Obtaining her degree wasn't for money reasons since David made more than enough for the both of them. This was an area of subject which has always been a great passion of hers.

David left his first wife for her. And the reason, as far as he was concerned, was due to Janie's looks. Janie was an attractive girl to say the least. And she was attracted to him, not so much for his money, but for how he treated her, which was far different than the other men she dated before him.

David found Janie to be gorgeous, but he did love her for her self-respectful attributes, about herself and the way she treated others.

He took a break from his work and went into the large den and fixed himself his usual late-afternoon drink and sat back in his leather chair and relaxed. Janie worked for a museum that housed many archeological finds and rare artifacts. She was very interested in ancient civilizations and had a great passion for ancient cultures.

David was going to surprise her with a vacation she's always wanted - a trip to the Bermuda Triangle. She was very intrigued in the island's mystery and the ancient culture that once habited the island.

One thing that Janie loved about David was his spontaneity like gifts, or trips he planned without her knowing. But over the last two years she had been too busy with her classes for them to get away.

It was getting close to 8 p.m. when David heard her car pull up in the driveway and he poured himself another drink. Janie walked into the den where David was sitting.

"How's my graduate?" He said.

"Fine, dear, how are you?"

David moved from is chair and put his arms around her.

"Mmmm, that's nice," she said. He reached into his back pocket and tapped the travel tickets against her back. She reached around and grabbed it.

"What is this?"

"Open it and find out," he said smiling.

"Oh my God...I can't believe you did this. Oh, honey...you're so wonderful to me." She held him tight and kissed him deep. She was so happy that tears spilled down her cheek.

"That's not all," he said raising his eyebrows.

"There's more?" Janie said with wide eyes.

"Yep, follow me." They walked up their long staircase and into their master bedroom. Lying on the bed was a beautifully wrapped box.

"Honey, is this for me? It sure is big." She ran over and held it up and shook the box like a child on Christmas morning. He loved her playful attitude.

"Go on," he said, "open it." She tore the wrapping from the box.

"Auh," she lifted out this long white dress and twirled around with it, "Oh, my, David, it's so beautiful."

"It's going to be just perfect for you to wear for our trip in Bermuda," he said and Janie scrambled over to the full-length mirror. She held it over herself and turned back and forth. The material was thin. The dress was sleeveless and backless and had white strings that tied behind the neck.

"It's kind of sexy don't you think? I want to try it on."

"No, I want you to wait until we get on the island," he said.

"But how do I know if it's going to fit?"

"Don't worry, I just know," he said and left the room.

She was in the bathroom mirror trying to see how the dress would look on her. She thought about putting it on then peaked around the corner to see if he was still there and closed the door. Janie removed her blue sweatshirt and her jeans but kept on her black bra and cotton panties. She slightly opened the bathroom door again, seeing if he was there.

She brushed her light brown hair, which hung past her shoulders and then stepped into the dress. It was snug as she pulled it up over her 35D cup bra. The top of the dress was split in the middle revealing her cleavage and then she tied the white strings behind her neck......................................"
 
I searched with google and could not locate it. - if the text quoted is in the story, and the story is still on Lit - I should have found it with the searches I used.

It is probable that the author took his/her stories down.
 
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