Editor

[Pars001]

I recently had a chapter of an old story returned to me. They suggested that I get an editor to help me straighten it out. This is the only site that has ever rejected this story so I nees help to figure out just what is wrong.

 

[yukonnights]

What did the notice say? They typically give some indication of what's wrong. Also, you might get better response if you list the category and length.