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I need a really good editor to point out grammatical and stylistic mistakes in my story chapter as well as the inevitable plot holes that every author is bound to make. Pacing, atmosphere, localization, and tone should be considered as well.
Said editor should ideally have experience publishing stories himself/herself.
My story builds on the Body Shifters' Universe series that Seraglio, XXXecil, and J. Swafford (the origin of this whole cum-soaked affair) have created. The premise of this whole series is that humanity has encountered a race of beautiful, super-intelligent, shape-shifting aliens that live off men's cum. Frequent and repeated copulation with them will inevitably lead to inhumanly enlarged male genitalia and semen production.
My story attempts to answer the question that surely rings in the minds of all romantics: Does love still have a chance?
PM me if you would like a draft of my first chapter. It's about 4377 words long, and is written in third person.
Said editor should ideally have experience publishing stories himself/herself.
My story builds on the Body Shifters' Universe series that Seraglio, XXXecil, and J. Swafford (the origin of this whole cum-soaked affair) have created. The premise of this whole series is that humanity has encountered a race of beautiful, super-intelligent, shape-shifting aliens that live off men's cum. Frequent and repeated copulation with them will inevitably lead to inhumanly enlarged male genitalia and semen production.
My story attempts to answer the question that surely rings in the minds of all romantics: Does love still have a chance?
PM me if you would like a draft of my first chapter. It's about 4377 words long, and is written in third person.
