Dejah_thoris_of_Mars
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Greetings,
I have a short ~3400 word story that I would like someone to look over. It is hardcore Femdom with elements of forced Bi and water sports. I need to know if my attempt at dealing with the psychology behind the mistress/slave dynamic is accurate, as well as my descriptions of the S&M. I am pretty comfortable with grammar, punctuation, and spelling; so, hopefully, there won't be a need to spend a lot of time on those areas. I'd also love feedback on clarity, sentence structure, and readability.
I use Word 2013 but I am happy to change the file format to whatever works for you.
Thanks so much for your time!
I have a short ~3400 word story that I would like someone to look over. It is hardcore Femdom with elements of forced Bi and water sports. I need to know if my attempt at dealing with the psychology behind the mistress/slave dynamic is accurate, as well as my descriptions of the S&M. I am pretty comfortable with grammar, punctuation, and spelling; so, hopefully, there won't be a need to spend a lot of time on those areas. I'd also love feedback on clarity, sentence structure, and readability.
I use Word 2013 but I am happy to change the file format to whatever works for you.
Thanks so much for your time!
