Editor wanted, SM-Story (FM), explicit, approx. 2.300 words.

[kimber22]

Hi dear editors,

The story I'm having is an explicit SM Story (FM/Msub): It's a story about a tourist being abducted somwhere in Africa, then carried to a dirty cellar where he awakes on a dirty mattress with his hands and feets in chains. That's the basic setting of the story. In total, part1, that's approx. 2.300 words.

Basically I think my text is publishable, but since I'm not native (i.e. German-speaking), I thought I'd better drop here a line to have someone have a look over it before I actually submit it

Looking forward to, feel free to PM' me. thx, cu,

kimber

 

[Blase]

Kimber,

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[CBM514]

Let me know if you still need someone to help with your submission

 

[kimber22]

sorry, and thx to Blase. I found the box to tick, at last...

thx, cu. kimber

 

[robertreams]

I would agree you need an editor. You used the term "feets"

 

[Digital_Bob]

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