Editor Wanted for First Post, Incest Fantasy

[CJMasterson]

Hi! i'm hoping to find an editor who would be willing to go over my work. I welcome all criticism as I feel it will better me as a writer! I hope to hear from someone soon!

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

You might get a better response if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

You might also get a better response if you specify the help you feel you need (e.g. grammar only, grammar and continuity, etc.), and the story's length (in words) as these factors play a large part in a volunteer editor's decision whether to offer help.

 

[CJMasterson]

ok

I enabled Private messaging. My story is approximately 2000 words, and I'm really looking for an editor to read it over, and tell me where it needs improvement.

 

[sadsack2008]

Hi,

nice ..we could discuss on gtalk or yahoo?...same nick in both places.

 

[bobkshaw]

CJ, I would love to take on this challenge. I have not been an editor before, but I think I can do a good job as incest r/p-fantasy is one of my prime interests and I am good with language, grammar and structure.

Ciao,
Kris

P.S.: I will also try and send you a PM about this.