Editor wanted for Femdom story

[carlieplum]

Anybody interested in editing a story, about 10,000 words? It's a femdom/CFNM piece, with a 36-year -old woman and 18-year-old man. It is not hardcore in its BDSM aspects. The sexual interaction and D/s activity takes place within a developing relationship that grows out of the two working together.

Please contact me, thanks. (This might turn into a longer, multi-part story, but I am not expecting the original editor will necessarily stay with it, although that would be nice.)

I do proof my work and it's clean, but a second set of eyes is good and this is new ground for me so feedback on plausibility and whether it is interesting would be welcome.

 

[_Lynn_]

Borrowed from snooper:

You might get a better response if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

 

[carlieplum]

Done. Thank you for the advice!