Editor wanted - bad hours, poor pay.

[geetwo29]

Hi there. Pleasantry etc...

I had a go a writing a story and what I came up with was a 9,000 odd word story with humour, a plot and a few sex scenes. I fear it is too long and that my love of words has once again struck. My literature teacher used to call it waffling, I prefer expanding.

Anyway the story is straight girl turns to a lesbian stranger after her man treats her bad.
It is much better than that brief description. Well as everyone I am a tad biased. So if anyone would like to have a peek and inform me of its deficiencies then that would be swell, if not I will just sit in a corner with it and stare at it until it fixes itself.

I understand you are all busy with other stories, and if it would be better to return at another time, then I will.

Thanks.

 

[geetwo29]

*puts a comfy cushion in the corner*

 

[Moralez18PT]

Poor pay is better than no pay at all, and I'd be happy for just the comfy cushion

Drop me a PM if you're interested in my interest

 

[Submissioness]

9,000 isn't too long. Have you READ some of the stories on here? We have a category for Novels/Novellas for cripes sake. I'm not an editor, just a fellow writer. Hope you find what you need here, you post your story and it's a success.

Hi there. Pleasantry etc...

I had a go a writing a story and what I came up with was a 9,000 odd word story with humour, a plot and a few sex scenes. I fear it is too long and that my love of words has once again struck. My literature teacher used to call it waffling, I prefer expanding.

Anyway the story is straight girl turns to a lesbian stranger after her man treats her bad.
It is much better than that brief description. Well as everyone I am a tad biased. So if anyone would like to have a peek and inform me of its deficiencies then that would be swell, if not I will just sit in a corner with it and stare at it until it fixes itself.

I understand you are all busy with other stories, and if it would be better to return at another time, then I will.

Thanks.

 

[KimCarlson]

Hi there. Pleasantry etc...

I had a go a writing a story and what I came up with was a 9,000 odd word story with humour, a plot and a few sex scenes. I fear it is too long and that my love of words has once again struck. My literature teacher used to call it waffling, I prefer expanding.

Anyway the story is straight girl turns to a lesbian stranger after her man treats her bad.
It is much better than that brief description. Well as everyone I am a tad biased. So if anyone would like to have a peek and inform me of its deficiencies then that would be swell, if not I will just sit in a corner with it and stare at it until it fixes itself.

I understand you are all busy with other stories, and if it would be better to return at another time, then I will.

Thanks.

Hi
If u still looking for someone to proof read it.I guess i could have a look at it for u.I do teach english
let me know
kisses
Kim