Editor/reviewer needed for non consent

[Caroline Covington]

I've written something in the non consent category. This is my first foray into such a topic. I seek a review and critique of the story. No punches pulled. I consider my mechanics (e.g. grammar, spelling, sentence structure) to be good, but I realise one can always miss something. However, I'm most interested in suggestions for improvements in plot, character development, mood, and other intangibles.

The story is the equivalent of about 4 Literotica pages.

Please pm if interested.

Thank you

 

[PacoFear]

<deleted> Sorry gang, I meant to PM the OP. In my defense, I was multi-tasking at the time. Poorly evidently.

 

[Caroline Covington]

Consider thread closed. Thanks.

 

[PacoFear]

Edited and returned to author.