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just 4 fun

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Hi All,

I have written a few stories for the site in the past which have received varying success. I still thourghly enjoy writing stories but I am aware that my enjoyment often leads to silly mistakes and despite my best efforts to read through and check my excitement often leaves me blind to these errors. http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=929175&page=submissions my previous work can be found here.

I am currently working on a story, which has evolved into a novel the working title is Cam Chat essentially a young mother finds herself in financial dificulties and turns to web shows for extra cash, this then spirals into her being involved in more explicit cam shows as she recognises many of the other performers which includes a string of students and even colleagues.

The story centers around the voyeristic nature although of cam shows and her passion for watching/being watched combined with a husband who due to their financial difficulties develops difficulties with erections.

The story has spirraled and includes at present MF, FF, FFM and MMF (at present a kind of cuckolding scene which may later be developed into F as centre of attention with no MM content) sex scenes. Two of the characters are twin girls and there is an element of incest between them (I am considering reworking this to make them close friends - so I am open to suggestions).

The piece at the moment is close to 30,000 words although split into a range of chapters varying in length.

I am looking for someone to help with proof reading of the text to assist with spelling., punctuation and grammar but also to look at plot and continuity issues which may have arisen as my imagination wanders.

I realise this is a big job especially as the piece is still growing but there is no immediate rush for work to be completed.

Thank You for taking the time to read this.

I look forward to hearing from you.
Just 4 Fun
 
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Hi All,

I have written a few stories for the site in the past which have received varying success. I still thourghly enjoy writing stories but I am aware that my enjoyment often leads to silly mistakes and despite my best efforts to read through and check my excitement often leaves me blind to these errors. http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=929175&page=submissions my previous work can be found here.

I am currently working on a story, which has evolved into a novel the working title is Cam Chat essentially a young mother finds herself in financial dificulties and turns to web shows for extra cash, this then spirals into her being involved in more explicit cam shows as she recognises many of the other performers which includes a string of students and even colleagues.

The story centers around the voyeristic nature although of cam shows and her passion for watching/being watched combined with a husband who due to their financial difficulties develops difficulties with erections.

The story has spirraled and includes at present MF, FF, FFM and MMF (at present a kind of cuckolding scene which may later be developed into F as centre of attention with no MM content) sex scenes. Two of the characters are twin girls and there is an element of incest between them (I am considering reworking this to make them close friends - so I am open to suggestions).

The piece at the moment is close to 30,000 words although split into a range of chapters varying in length.

I am looking for someone to help with proof reading of the text to assist with spelling., punctuation and grammar but also to look at plot and continuity issues which may have arisen as my imagination wanders.

I realise this is a big job especially as the piece is still growing but there is no immediate rush for work to be completed.

Thank You for taking the time to read this.

I look forward to hearing from you.
Just 4 Fun



I could help if you want... I'm not the most experienced, but I have plenty of time and am more than willing to help :)
PM me if you're interested.
 
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