Editor? Not used one yet, but I think I could benefit

[BusterGonad]

Cheating girlfriend story, possibly series. First time asking for an editor. Please h

The original post was wrong, tonally, so I'm rewriting it.

Hi folks, I'm a Literotica author. I've got a few stories up. They mostly follow a pattern, which involves cheating and humiliation. I don't like scat, I don't want the husband to find out, I don't want him to be "defeated". I do tend to have big dicks and big tits in my stories, because they are porn.

I have a story now, which uses some of my existing characters, but you needn't know them to enjoy the story. It's at the stage where I would usually post it. I've redrafted it, checked the grammar and spelling, enjoyed it again. I would like to try having someone else read it and give me tips about where it could be improved or broken up or where my regional accent shows through.

I'm open to ideas. I don't think I'm an amazing writer, so you can definitely help to improve this. Thanks.

So, I've got a story that's got a bit longer than usual. It's my usual fare, cheating, big dicks, tits a plenty. Nothing too taxing. But there's more of it than my usual. I meant it's mostly done, too, which is fairly unusual.

So, I guess I'm looking for an editor. There's certainly some different things I'd like from an editor. I'd like someone to say "that sex scene is ridiculous," or maybe it's ok, this is porn. I'd like someone to say "This could be two stories," or maybe three. Possibly I got it right. But I guess it's important to me that they look at the non sex aspects and say "you could do this better, I'm not immersed here."

What can I do to make you interested?

 

[_Lynn_]

Turn on Private Messages.

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[BusterGonad]

Done. I didn't know they were off. Thanks

 

[_Lynn_]

Done. I didn't know they were off. Thanks

The default setting is off. And you're welcome.

 

[BusterGonad]

The default setting is off. And you're welcome.

I see why, already, lol.

 

[BusterGonad]

So, any editors interested in helping me make this one better?

 

[BusterGonad]

The original post was wrong, tonally, so I'm rewriting it.

Hi folks, I'm a Literotica author. I've got a few stories up. They mostly follow a pattern, which involves cheating and humiliation. I don't like scat, I don't want the husband to find out, I don't want him to be "defeated". I do tend to have big dicks and big tits in my stories, because they are porn.

I have a story now, which uses some of my existing characters, but you needn't know them to enjoy the story. It's at the stage where I would usually post it. I've redrafted it, checked the grammar and spelling, enjoyed it again. I would like to try having someone else read it and give me tips about where it could be improved or broken up or where my regional accent shows through.

I'm open to ideas. I don't think I'm an amazing writer, so you can definitely help to improve this. Thanks.

Just to save people scrolling to find my edit

 

[BusterGonad]

I've just posted the first part of the story I'm looking for an editor for. There's another part in review, and I think 4 more that length. Any takers?

 

[astuffedshirt_perv]

I've just posted the first part of the story I'm looking for an editor for. There's another part in review, and I think 4 more that length. Any takers?

Seriously, how do you expect people to find your story?

 

[BusterGonad]

Seriously, how do you expect people to find your story?

Good point, well made. I am not the smartest cookie, am I?

https://www.literotica.com/s/fi-ch-02-fi-meets-petes-friend.