kurtomatic
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I'm looking for someone with a particular set of skills.... and they're not sexual.
I wrote this story a couple of months ago: https://www.literotica.com/s/the-girl-who-gets-what-she-wants. It garnered a reasonable amount of acclaim, so naturally I'm currently working on a second story involving the same characters. One of the characters is a personal trainer, and there's an element of her job involved in the story, regarding specific exercises and pieces of equipment.
While I've done some google fu, I still feel a little clumsy trying to work this into the story, as it just doesn't feel authentic to me. I'm looking for someone to review (at least) the personal training portions of the story. I've got the same editor I previously used volunteering to agree to do the whole thing, but I'm hoping to get at least one person with a relevant background to make sure it flows with the story.
I anticipate finishing the story in the next month or so, but I'm anticipating the story will be long - probably 15-20k words, like the last one - so you would be welcome to edit either as much of the story as you wanted, or just the relevant portions, which would be a significantly smaller chunk of the tale. I'm not opposed to getting input from multiple people if there's a opportunity for it, either.
Send me a PM if you're able, and maybe a quick bit about your experience. Doesn't have to necessarily be a professional trainer, but someone who has used one on a regular basis might be fine as well.
Thanks in advance!
I wrote this story a couple of months ago: https://www.literotica.com/s/the-girl-who-gets-what-she-wants. It garnered a reasonable amount of acclaim, so naturally I'm currently working on a second story involving the same characters. One of the characters is a personal trainer, and there's an element of her job involved in the story, regarding specific exercises and pieces of equipment.
While I've done some google fu, I still feel a little clumsy trying to work this into the story, as it just doesn't feel authentic to me. I'm looking for someone to review (at least) the personal training portions of the story. I've got the same editor I previously used volunteering to agree to do the whole thing, but I'm hoping to get at least one person with a relevant background to make sure it flows with the story.
I anticipate finishing the story in the next month or so, but I'm anticipating the story will be long - probably 15-20k words, like the last one - so you would be welcome to edit either as much of the story as you wanted, or just the relevant portions, which would be a significantly smaller chunk of the tale. I'm not opposed to getting input from multiple people if there's a opportunity for it, either.
Send me a PM if you're able, and maybe a quick bit about your experience. Doesn't have to necessarily be a professional trainer, but someone who has used one on a regular basis might be fine as well.
Thanks in advance!
