Editor needed!

[ta2dgrl]

Hi everyone,

I have written my first taboo story and would really like to get someone else's point of view on it.

What I'm looking for specifically is grammar, flow, character details (to many, not enough) and general feedback on my story.

I have emailed 2 other editors with no response. If any you are interested please let me know, I'd really like to get it submitted soon.



Thank you!

Ta2dgrl

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Hi everyone,

I have written my first taboo story and would really like to get someone else's point of view on it.

What I'm looking for specifically is grammar, flow, character details (to many, not enough) and general feedback on my story.

I have emailed 2 other editors with no response. If any you are interested please let me know, I'd really like to get it submitted soon.



Thank you!

Ta2dgrl

Yes, and after all other avenues dried up, the writer contacted me.

That's okay, I don't feel slighted... haven't been in the forums lately since been busy with editing, but oh well.

Glad to help T2

 

[ta2dgrl]

Thank You

Thank you very much A.S.!

I've already sent over my story via email. Let me know. I'll be working on the 2nd part.

Thankx again!

Ta2dgrl

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Thank you very much A.S.!

I've already sent over my story via email. Let me know. I'll be working on the 2nd part.

Thankx again!

Ta2dgrl

Uhm, never got it. Have been waiting and tried to contact you to no avail - ???

 

[ta2dgrl]

Still in process

A.S.

I haven't sent the 2nd part. No need to worry. I have your email and should have it finished soon. I just started back to work full time, so my writing has slowed a bit.

Question:

What was your thought on the first part?


Oh! All your changes and advice made total sense. I went with your suggestions 100%

Thank you!