Editor Needed

[thatgirlblue]

Hi,

I'm looking for someone to give me some feedback on a group/public sex story.

It is a work in progress - and was done in the heat of passion (funny story), so I need an objective eye to give me some perspective. I'm waaaaaay too close to this one.

Thanks!
blue

 

[LadyCibelle]

Hi,

I'm looking for someone to give me some feedback on a group/public sex story.

It is a work in progress - and was done in the heat of passion (funny story), so I need an objective eye to give me some perspective. I'm waaaaaay too close to this one.

Thanks!
blue

Welcome to the EF Blue. I'm sure one of our wonderful editor will step up to the plate and give you the help you need.

 

[thatgirlblue]

Thanks for the welcome!

Everyone here has been awesome - so I know that someone will step up.

blue!