Hi,
I posted to an editor, who was for his part quite gracious and responded quickly.
I am a bit new to this place. I think some of his issues, revolved around the length of my story. Its about 10 parts long now, and its true.
Its a story about how I get interested in D/s and how I have selected a master and am now going to visit my family with him with a bizzare twist. You see, its a bit of a chance to dangle what I am in front of them, but not to force it down there throat. A sort of game, really.
Anyway, if anyone is interested in helping, I need ideas more than just grammar stuff. I write more plain english as if I was talking out loud.
I posted to an editor, who was for his part quite gracious and responded quickly.
I am a bit new to this place. I think some of his issues, revolved around the length of my story. Its about 10 parts long now, and its true.
Its a story about how I get interested in D/s and how I have selected a master and am now going to visit my family with him with a bizzare twist. You see, its a bit of a chance to dangle what I am in front of them, but not to force it down there throat. A sort of game, really.
Anyway, if anyone is interested in helping, I need ideas more than just grammar stuff. I write more plain english as if I was talking out loud.
