Editor Needed

[TheCoyote]

Hello,

I am looking for some help with a series of stories I have been working on. I have been an rp'er and involved in cooperative story writing for a while. I have been working on some stories just on my own. I am used to doing my writing off the top of my head and based off of another writer's actions and reactions. I need so.e help with sentence structure and keeping the stories flowing smoothly. If anyone would be interested I would be happy to hear from you.
I realize this is an erotic story site, I have spent many hours reading here on Literorica. I will not however make my stories evolve around sex. I like the stories that the sex is part of the overall story not a bunch of filler revolving around sex. If you would be willing to take a look at what I have please let me know.

The Coyote

 

[TheCoyote]

My apologies for the typos. I posted this from the seat of a tractor with my smart phone. I promise any potential editors the previous post is not a reflection on my writing.

The Coyote

 

[LadyVer]

My apologies for the typos. I posted this from the seat of a tractor with my smart phone. I promise any potential editors the previous post is not a reflection on my writing.

The Coyote

I sense a plot bunny here.

Out of curiosity, what is the genre/category for your series and the word count? This information would be helpful to editors.

 

[TheCoyote]

The plot revolves around a secret agency of supernatural beings that are involved with the policing and protection of the supernatural community. My intro chapter is about nine hundred and fifty words and the first story I have completed is two chapters of around twenty two to twenty five hundred words long.

What is a plot bunny?

 

[sr71plt]

What is a plot bunny?

An idea for a plotline.

 

[TheCoyote]

Ah, well I hope its as interesting to others as it is to me.

 

[wildescarlet]

The plot revolves around a secret agency of supernatural beings that are involved with the policing and protection of the supernatural community.

Like the Talamasca?
I'm not an editor but I wouldn't mind giving feedback

 

[TheCoyote]

I would appreciate any feedback. I haven't heard of Talamasca, hopefully I am not stepping on any toes or beating an idea to death that has been done before. But if you are willing I will send you my E-mail address in pm. I would like some feedback

 

[wildescarlet]

Feedback

The Talamasca is an organization conceived of by Anne Rice that monitors vampires, witches, etc. But as the saying goes- good artists borrow; great artists steal.
PM anytime!

 

[TheCoyote]

Sounds like I need to find some Anne Rice books then xD