Editor Needed - Warcraft story

[Sneakingsuspicion]

I wrote an erotic story just to vent some of my sexual frustrations and fantasies, as uncouth as they may be, but seeing as I immerse myself in a virtual world most of the day, I found it hard to stray from that concept. It's 16 pages long and maybe a bit slow, but I'll let you be the judge. Ideally this little series will go for three parts, but I only need you to read just this one. I don't know when I'll get back to it because 1) I don't know whether it's any good or not; 2) I tend to focus on one story at a time, and I'd like to finish another piece.

I'm a new writer to Literotica and I don't really know how this process goes, so hopefully I can get a little friendly guidance if I'm doing something wrong.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

You might get a better response if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

 

[sr71plt]

Best to describe your story in wordage rather than pages. What pages? Word? (and if so, with what page parameters? Each can be 250 or 500 words depending on the page setup). Lit.? (about 3,750 words each). So, undefined "page" doesn't mean much.

 

[Sneakingsuspicion]

10,300 words, and I turned on my private messages. Thanks.

 

[degrepski]

If you're interested, I'm well versed in Warcraft Lore (Been playing since WC2, and even went on to go back and play through 1). I wouldn't mind taking a crack at it. Send me a PM if you're interested, and I'll send you my email for you to send it to me.

As a fellow author, know that I hold the ideals of Copyright and Integrity in high regard.

 

[Sneakingsuspicion]

If you're interested, I'm well versed in Warcraft Lore (Been playing since WC2, and even went on to go back and play through 1). I wouldn't mind taking a crack at it. Send me a PM if you're interested, and I'll send you my email for you to send it to me.

As a fellow author, know that I hold the ideals of Copyright and Integrity in high regard.

Well that sounds good. I know there are a few Warcraft stories on literotica, so I'm hoping you don't insist on telling me to change Dalaran to "Doloron" or the like, because there's a good chunk of "fanfiction" about Sylvanas. Still, I'll be happy to disclaimer it with the copyright info if you don't mind telling me what to put for it. I'm just need an editor before I post it here for free and all to see, and so I can get some honest critique on my writing style.

Integrity of the lore is good too, if I made a blatant mistake in terms of one official character's personalities or something, then I'd like to know about it. Contact me in PMs with your e-mail address and I'll mail it to you with some more details on the story.