Editor needed please!

[JackBellend41]

Hi!

I'm looking for an editor interested in helping me. Here’s some info about my story.
Title: Wanna Bet?
Synopsis: Two rival preschool teachers escalate their wagers on a game of pool. One is humiliated, the other vindicated.
Category: noncon/reluc? group? loving wives? Exhibition? Could use help deciding
Words: approx. 16,000

I'm open to critique and criticism. I've run my story through Grammarly, so hopefully your time won't be wasted on spelling/grammar. I want to make my story better and another set of eyes and opinions would be fantastic.

Thanks!
Jack

 

[radlas1984]

I'll have a look. I'll PM you.

 

[Leilajoon]

I also need an editor for my story "An Educational Leap". I submitted it on 2020/09/09 but its not published yet.

 

[tallladiesman]

Similar problem here