LaRascasse
I dream, therefore I am
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I'm finishing up a new lesbian story and my regular editor is currently on vacation, so I'd like to ask someone else here if they could help.
Category - Lesbian
Length - 10-11K words
Language - English with UK spellings
Themes - Some rough sex, biting, fisting etc
Formats - I'll provide a doc file since it's compatible with most text editors
Editing required - I don't make too many spelling and grammar errors, but there may be a few missing words and there/their type mistakes. The main thing I want is an opinion on the story and characters.
Turn around time - As soon as possible. 2-3 days ideal.
Excerpt (beginning) -
Heather Franklin sat on the edge of the bed, admiring the crack of dawn outside her balcony. A crimson tinge spread over the horizon, slowly swelling in the middle as the curve of the rising sun made its appearance. The middle of the red line crested and rose, heralding the brilliant yellowish sun at the start of its daily trudge across the sky.
She looked back at her crumpled bed to see a girl asleep, peacefully curled up. Her face was hidden under a mass of black curls. Her naked body was partly covered in the sheets. She lay on her side. Her soft, undulating skin rose and fell with every breath. The previous night, she had been wild and adventurous. She had made Heather's body respond in ways it had not done in a while.
She had no name. Heather had not known her before the previous night and wouldn't see her again. It was the unspoken understanding between them from the moment Heather saw her at the bar.
Heather took a long drag before dropping her cigarette to the floor. She stomped on it and rubbed the ember out.
“Coffee, cab fare and that will be that,” she murmured under her breath, summarizing her usual relationship.
New day, new pussy, same old routine.
PM me your email address and I'll get in touch with you when I've finished writing (sometime tomorrow presumably). Thanks in advance.
Category - Lesbian
Length - 10-11K words
Language - English with UK spellings
Themes - Some rough sex, biting, fisting etc
Formats - I'll provide a doc file since it's compatible with most text editors
Editing required - I don't make too many spelling and grammar errors, but there may be a few missing words and there/their type mistakes. The main thing I want is an opinion on the story and characters.
Turn around time - As soon as possible. 2-3 days ideal.
Excerpt (beginning) -
Heather Franklin sat on the edge of the bed, admiring the crack of dawn outside her balcony. A crimson tinge spread over the horizon, slowly swelling in the middle as the curve of the rising sun made its appearance. The middle of the red line crested and rose, heralding the brilliant yellowish sun at the start of its daily trudge across the sky.
She looked back at her crumpled bed to see a girl asleep, peacefully curled up. Her face was hidden under a mass of black curls. Her naked body was partly covered in the sheets. She lay on her side. Her soft, undulating skin rose and fell with every breath. The previous night, she had been wild and adventurous. She had made Heather's body respond in ways it had not done in a while.
She had no name. Heather had not known her before the previous night and wouldn't see her again. It was the unspoken understanding between them from the moment Heather saw her at the bar.
Heather took a long drag before dropping her cigarette to the floor. She stomped on it and rubbed the ember out.
“Coffee, cab fare and that will be that,” she murmured under her breath, summarizing her usual relationship.
New day, new pussy, same old routine.
PM me your email address and I'll get in touch with you when I've finished writing (sometime tomorrow presumably). Thanks in advance.
