Editor needed incest story

[BigMadStork]

I tried to find an editor using the search section. 4 tries and no luck. Fourth try I cc myself and nothing. Is it working?

I have two complete incest stories that need review. Word's grammar and spell checker were used. One story is long but it's an easy read. I do some technical writing profesionally, this is my first try at something else.*I take criticism well, I know it improves the story. Anyone out there interested in helping?

I have another idea for a story that would be fun to collaborate with others to get different viewpoints of a group into the story. I think different styles (sex and writing)and viewpoints would add to the story.

 

[HeyAll]

How long is your story?

 

[BigMadStork]

How long is your story?

7 and 90 pages in MS Word. 30+ chapters making it easy to break up. I like a good story that unfolds, surprises, amuses, and explains why characters do what they do.

I have no timetable so nobody should feel rushed. I think it flows well and has plenty of sex within the story that helps support the story.

 

[BigMadStork]

My writing style is going to be loved by some and hated by some, I can live with that. I need someone to read the story and explain where it is confusing, boring, unnecessary, or just dumb. These stories should not be an exercise in grammar and spell correcting. Your red pen should be circling paragraphs with awkward, unclear, a description of what I could do better, a big red X because a part is unnecessary, distracts from the story, or a new direction the story could take. Pointing out redundant words/phrases and misused words is always welcome but if that is all you can do, this will probably be boring for you.

 

[Jim1855]

I would be more than happy to give it a shot.