I am writing a story of romance in a fantasy environtment, which will turn in later chapters into harem development.
As of now,the first chapter has already more than five thousand words and isn't finished yet, though i'm doubting about parting what i already have into smaller chapters.
My main problems may be two: First, i am spanish and i could make some mistakes in the usage of some words or expressions. I think i have grammar well covered.
The second is, to be completely true, my actual editor: Our styles don't match completely and he doesn't stop suggesting me that i add more sex scenes, while i'm trying to write an interesting story with plot, not just a text completely revolving around sex for a quick fap. I have already sent him a mail to thank him for his guidance up to now, and thus i start a search for a more compatible editor.
So my ideal would be someone with experience in both romance and fantasy stories, who can help me with plot development and making each of my characters the way i want them to be and who is interested in a plot that does not revolve only around sex.
EDIT: I forgot to say i don't touch male homo-erotism, rape and group sex involving one female with many males. On the other hand my story will involve sex with non human females, and given it will eventually become a harem story, threesome or even foursome with one human male and several non human females may occur too
Thank you all in advance for, at least, taking your time to read this
As of now,the first chapter has already more than five thousand words and isn't finished yet, though i'm doubting about parting what i already have into smaller chapters.
My main problems may be two: First, i am spanish and i could make some mistakes in the usage of some words or expressions. I think i have grammar well covered.
The second is, to be completely true, my actual editor: Our styles don't match completely and he doesn't stop suggesting me that i add more sex scenes, while i'm trying to write an interesting story with plot, not just a text completely revolving around sex for a quick fap. I have already sent him a mail to thank him for his guidance up to now, and thus i start a search for a more compatible editor.
So my ideal would be someone with experience in both romance and fantasy stories, who can help me with plot development and making each of my characters the way i want them to be and who is interested in a plot that does not revolve only around sex.
EDIT: I forgot to say i don't touch male homo-erotism, rape and group sex involving one female with many males. On the other hand my story will involve sex with non human females, and given it will eventually become a harem story, threesome or even foursome with one human male and several non human females may occur too
Thank you all in advance for, at least, taking your time to read this
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