Editor needed for non-consent/reluctant serries

[StoryOfMy_Life]

I have started a series in the "non-consent/reluctant" category. It is set in a private school and follows the adventures of Anna and her classmates after Anna is manipulated into exposing herself. All characters are adults, and the story reinforces that fact many times. You can read the first chapter: http://www.literotica.com/s/the-short-skirt-ch-01

When I wrote the first chapter a year or so ago, I decided not to post it for two reasons. 1) The plot seemed implausible. 2) The story depicts obvious manipulation committed by staff trusted to look out for their students. I don't like writing about despicable characters. However, my despicable characters are not nearly as cynical and manipulative as others in the genre.

I eventually posted the first chapter because the Anna character's reluctant experiences are very arousing to me. I don't condone the events described, but they get me hot. Several readers allayed my fears about plausibility. (I'm disturbed by how plausible some readers think it is)

I just submitted Chapter 2 and an edit of Chapter 1. I keep finding typos and incorrect homonyms (damn automatic spell checker changes what I type, and I don't always notice.)

I need an editor to help me catch the errors. I also need someone to help me find a balance between sexy adventures of a submissive young woman and yucky exploitation. I want more sexy adventure and less yucky, but a certain degree of exploitation is driving the plot.

Please PM me if you are interested in editing this type of story. I know it's not for everyone.

 

[black_maestra]

School teacher here...

I could give it a try, I hate the way that sounded; but I'm being honest. I wrote a story on here about nonconsent/reluctant without an editor. It was rejected once. I got decent comments and rated 4.39.

I recently used an editor from Literotica. He was good, but unfortunately he didn't finish editing. So I noted his earlier comments and edited the rest by myself. I just submitted chapter 2: Obsessed with Ember. Read it and see if you like or are even comfortable with my writing style.

I'm black_maestra.