Editor needed for Mind Control story

[XRaySpecks]

OK, I wnet to the Volunteer Editor list and used the search function. Category=Mind Control, format=text, language=english. Number of results: zero. NOBODY here edits MC stories?

I have started writing a story about a male character who has a sort of magical ability to talk people into anything. In the first scene, he gets pulled over for speeding by a female cop and talks her out of her clothes.

I'm quite good with grammar and spelling, its the content I'd like opinions on (OK, on which I'd like opinions). Can anyone help?

 

[MaxSebastian]

Sure, why not.

I'm not a world expert on mind control, but then who really is?

(Answers on a brainwave)

 

[XRaySpecks]

Thanx, Max.

I took a look at your profile, and it says you can only accept .doc format. I've tried, but I can't seem to make WordPad save in anything but .rtf and .txt formats. .rtf is the default, and I can make it a .txt file, but .doc seems to be out of my reach. Can you accept .txt files?

Please reply to my e-mail.

 

[Dr.Watson]

Re: Editor needed for Mind Control Story

I just checked my profile, and ALL of the Categories you listed are checked on it.

I have some time available for editing right now. If you want me to edit it, follow the standard proceedure.

Doc. W