Editor needed for interracial (bw/wm) story

[Midnight_Flux]

Hi, hello and hey


I have recently finished writing chapter one of a two chapter story set in 1974 about an unlikely 'romance' (or something roughly in that direction) between a crude white biker type and a black female hitchhiker. The first part focuses on building a sense of chemistry, in the second part the story will veer more off towards a bdsm-ey/non-consent vibe.

I am looking for an editor with an eye for dialogue and who will provide a bit of constructive criticism and a fresh perspective. If the story sucks, perhaps you can help me mold it into something that will be less of a potential eyesore, when I unleash it upon the good perverts of Lit

PM me if you're interested. Your help will definitely be appreciated.

MFlux X

 

[_Lynn_]

I'm swamped myself, but good luck in your search for help.

 

[inthecountry]

editor

I'm not sure if I've been approved as an editor yet (i filled out the form)but I could read your story and let you know what I think

 

[Midnight_Flux]

thank you

Thanks for your response MistressLynn and In the Country,

An editor very generously agreed to have a look at the story on the day I posted this topic which was great. Hopefully I will have it up on the website once it is palatable

MF X